【Within an hour, I got Luo Qixi's favor. Within four days, I got the favor of Rudius. Task reward: cure the magic groove —— unlock (2/4). 】
“2/4? No! System You are a swordsman growth guide, what a strange task?! What the hell do you like?
—
many years later:
“Bossist in the Holy Land of the Sword, the Charming Sword God of the University of Magic, the pillar of the beloved dragon god, and the Baron Lover who would cover up crying and cry. What do you think of Rudius's stigma that is called ‘ a famous fraudster ’ by the world? Mr. Allen?”
—
“First of all, regarding my title, please don’t make up, I have the right to take responsibility. As for Rudy: I have repeatedly emphasized that in my eyes, like my child, he does have some places of inferiority and cowardice, but these prove that he is a real person. The trajectory of this era is accompanied by his growth, and it is responsible to say that he should be a legend. ”
The next day.
“I have repeatedly emphasized that Rudy is my son, he is cowardly and cowardly, and I should take full responsibility. ”— Cat, Cat and Dog Academy tabloid.
—
The book is also famous: Becoming Brother Alice also needs to live seriously/I just want to be the sword god, what the title of the charming sword god? /The opening task brushes Luo Qixi's favor, you call this the Sword God Road? /My system is very problematic.
—
【Genius flow, sword art has two extensions. The original plot of the subject after 30 chapters. 】
1. = Dragging Pacing: The story can feel like it’s napping with Kizaru, stretching small moments over too many short chapters, leaving you itching for the next big wave.
2. = Wonky Writing: Starts strong, but later chapters get sloppy—grammar fumbles and some AI-ish vibes that yank you out of the fun.
3. = Harem Hijack: The sudden harem stuff is like a random stowaway, stealing spotlight from the chat group and One Piece action you’re here for.
4. = Kizaru’s Wasted Spark: Those epic light powers and Admiral swagger could light up crossovers, but they’re often just chilling in the background.
5. = Weird Plot Twists: Stuff like Luffy mastering Haki in days or nukes popping up feels like it sailed in from another story, messing with the flow.
I like Crossovers 1/2*
I like One Piece1/2*
I like Overpowered Lazy Protagonist 1/2*
To make it whole 1/2*
Interesting concept but I am unable to understand what is going on in the real world of mc.
What is real motive To grow his World.
How this space Came into existence??
The rules of the space are not clearly explained.
Part of MC's story is less than maybe 5% Of the whole fanfiction.
Story was quite good but it was written by the author to early as author don't about the future plot of One Piece so he has to simontaniously including the ongoing story in FF.
there are many plot holes author has tried his best to fill the holes.
For me I don't like story when MC is in one piece it is boring in one piece
but FF got very intrusting when MC trevel to different worlds
Familiar of zero ( It's ok )[ heart ]
Mushoku Tensei ( I loved it )[ magic , Sword ]
Re:zero ( Good )[ Divine Protection ]
Akame ga Kill! ( it's ok )[ Teigu ]
Danmachi ( Gooood )[ Divine Protection ]
JUST SKIP ONE PIECE AND READ IN STORY
Good but there is problem with understanding the realm
like Great Emperor - God Emperor - then again Great Emperor - Saint????
REALY HARD TO UNDERSTAND
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
2.7 (7 reviews)【Inactive Rebirth Crossing Guide — Swordsman's Road, Instant Mission Release 】
【Within an hour, I got Luo Qixi's favor. Within four days, I got the favor of Rudius. Task reward: cure the magic groove —— unlock (2/4). 】
“2/4? No! System You are a swordsman growth guide, what a strange task?! What the hell do you like?
—
many years later:
“Bossist in the Holy Land of the Sword, the Charming Sword God of the University of Magic, the pillar of the beloved dragon god, and the Baron Lover who would cover up crying and cry. What do you think of Rudius's stigma that is called ‘ a famous fraudster ’ by the world? Mr. Allen?”
—
“First of all, regarding my title, please don’t make up, I have the right to take responsibility. As for Rudy: I have repeatedly emphasized that in my eyes, like my child, he does have some places of inferiority and cowardice, but these prove that he is a real person. The trajectory of this era is accompanied by his growth, and it is responsible to say that he should be a legend. ”
The next day.
“I have repeatedly emphasized that Rudy is my son, he is cowardly and cowardly, and I should take full responsibility. ”— Cat, Cat and Dog Academy tabloid.
—
The book is also famous: Becoming Brother Alice also needs to live seriously/I just want to be the sword god, what the title of the charming sword god? /The opening task brushes Luo Qixi's favor, you call this the Sword God Road? /My system is very problematic.
—
【Genius flow, sword art has two extensions. The original plot of the subject after 30 chapters. 】