Mc appears OP but he seems to be a dog left for Tang san to be stepped on lin later. I am not saying he is weak but Whole Notion can be more thrilling like 100 1v1,1v2, 1v7 etc. These notion are best one, some training modules are good. So this novel where MC has OP system but still under shadow or say Connected to Tang family.

Not worthy to listed, @wtr remove this piece of work as Author must be drunk while writing this fanfiction. No commitment to the theme. Just jig jag , immortal, abyss, Chaos, yin-yang body, double pupil, etc. Do you know just a wisp of double pupil and Douluo plane is over But here all concepts are messed

It can be like Great Sage Equalling Heaven, where fights will be motivating, exciting, thrilling, few imposing fighting styles, golden hoop and With 'Qiangu' surname more staff techniques etc. Start is intersting but later on ot becomes some scumbag life story without any thriller. Bogus 😡😡

Too op character. So first 15 chapters are just look like a overpowered couple spending their daily life in a low level Douluo World. Trying hard not to kill an ant(Titled Douluo) by mistake. So , Nothing intersting

Shit

Not as interesting as Novel's Title

Try to add more fights, skill sets ,thriller mysteries etc.