No concept of battle power, no training just Time waste, no pain as if MC is just a softie who will break for even a tiny bit pain. So My suggestion for this type of MC is to just be beaten badly such that their balls got crashed, bones smashed, be defeated by Tang San itself who may be hypocrite bit in term of cultivation he is genuine.
Concept - 4/5
Cultivation/Cheat - 4/5
Story - 1/5
Our Protagonist is killing one sect then go to next location, again killing next sect then this process goes on. In between he will concoct exilir for his sister. That's all
Concept is good but again execution is worst.
Mc should have some battle in early part, systematic cultivation as he was previously a martial artist, but here he is just relying on system blindly. He doesn't even have spear intent, what the hack author is thinking while writing this piece of shit. Atleast look at Sword Douluo, he is able to perform human and sword as one with sword intent and sword domain while OUR ULTRA POWERFUL MC DOESN'T EVEN HAVE QUALIFICATION OF HAVING A SPEAR INTENT & MOST FUNNY THING IS THAT HE WAS A MARTIAL ARTIST IN HIS PREVIOUS LIFE🤣🤣🤣🤣. Even more HILARIOUS is that while having 8-9 red spirit rings he can't even beat combination of sword and bone Douluo easily. What the heck!!!!!!?