One of the stupidest stories I've ever read. With the dumbest MC to boot.

I highly recommend this story. It's undoubtedly one of the most enjoyable I've read in the football genre. The positives. Lack of extreme nationalism. Unlike other novels where the main characters claim to make the Chinese national team the best in the world, this one is much more realistic. There's not much attachment to one's former identity or overly dramatic situations. His system, or rather his cheating, is very reasonable. It takes effort to evolve. A lot of effort. His talent doesn't come from nowhere. Moreover, his system has no conscience. It's more like an innate talent. Very pleasant format. Systems that always appear capable of communicating or that give all sorts of missions have always greatly annoyed me. The MC doesn't have an annoying personality. At least not too much. There's no racism. He treats everyone with the same attitude. Then the negatives. Although his development is gradual, in the story, it's still too rapid. The author seems to want him to become the best player in the world in just 20 years. I don't know why he wants to improve so much. He wants to win everything, too quickly, unfortunately. It would have been a little better if he had reached his peak around 23 or 24 years old. Which, since he was 17, allows us to see his career a little longer. Because given the format of his cheating, he would have no equal once he reached the top. So he would no longer even have any interest in playing. Ending his career at such a young age would be a bit regrettable. Well, that's just my opinion. Another negative point: he seems to have a big problem with his emotions. Almost as if he can't control himself. Anyway, a pretty good story. Also, another positive point: he seems faithful to one partner. Another very enjoyable fact to read. There you go. Objectively, it would be more like a 4/4.5 star, but oh well. Enjoyable reading, everyone.

Not bad for the moment

Trash 🗑️🗑️

There's a problem. A big problem, even! Did I read the same story as you? Why a 5-star rating from so many people? It makes absolutely no sense. The MC is stupid. He's acting like an idiot. Both the real Raymond and the reincarnated one. His actions are completely confusing. Why give 5 stars without stating the reason?

One of the best Naruto fanfics? I don't understand why it's so great.

Boring! Just the first story with The Count's Daughter exhausted me. All that for that.

Everything seems completely confusing. Why is he talking so much? Even Peter Parker doesn't talk that much, damn it.

Super story

No need to read. In the second chapter alone, the expression *yellow-skinned monkey* appears more than 10 times. And that's from Black people. In short... It gives you an image of the author.