While some points may be average, It's interesting for the worldview, just a bit slow.

Psychopath Author. Obsessed with "Untouchables".

Only Cultivation and lying down, no other activity or skill or future planning for real body. Don't want to take responsibilities, then regrets it a little, then meh. Brain Problem!

Nice Goldfinger usage, Nicely written.

Normal paced, not much unnecessary info. Overall Good.