simple faceslapping novel. 99% of the novel is internet comments and reactions

The story is good for the most part but it starts to go down at around 150ch. First the author does something i absolutely despise in novels, a forced timeskip of more than a hundred billion years just for the Mc to be in the same time as Lou feng. This alone pissed me off, but the fact that him cultivating 2 systems doesn't really add much besides the beginning of the story also makes it go down in rating. The execution just falls off in general.

This isn't a bad novel, its just predictable. It has every cliche and its done well. It just isnt my cup of tea, after once you've read enough of them they become quite boring. I will still give it a 4/5 since beginners or people wanting this type of story will really like it.

This story has the same problems that a lot of wh40k fanfictions have, the Mc is barely in the story. This one is a little better at that but it still is a frustrating read. ps: Use the term replacer on "Art student" to something like Star lord or the novel will suck even more.

Whats even the point of these kind of stories. 99% of the time the Mc doesn't even appear, its already 100ch into the story and the primarchs are more of a main character than the Mc himself

such a frustrating read. The powers are not well explained, it takes forever to go to other worlds and everything feels so dragged out

i'm suprised how high the rating are, this novel has almost no story only a description of the end. It also has no Mc which sucks. The ninja's are also massively nerfed as they struggle against some zombies from mr.zombies which are not that strong.

There are a couple of problrms woth this novel , The Mc does get stronger, but very slowly and yet his performance is miles ahead of the start which doesn't make sense. The original Mc is just from earth with no combat experience so how does he become a lot better than the body's years of combat experience. The slow pace and unclear power scaling makes it a nono for me

Okay so after the first 20-30 chapters the 'system' changes into something else. This also changes the direction of the story as a whole. So if you want to read a power upgrade by killing story this is not it. Some may like it and other wont, I'm not a big fan of the change

Just like an old gum sticking to the wall in your room, the Mc does absolutely nothing to the story. Im not even sure what the point is of writing this novel. Its doesn't change anything from canon at all.