It’s an interesting premise, it’s written from the fallout perspective after the mc has died. It seems like a mainstream opinion in the Chinese fanfiction community that the uchiha are inherently evil. Constantly throughout the story the cannon characters they say stuff like the uchiha should’ve just died quietly. They are evil, why do they have to give us problems even after they were genocided. Throughout the entire story the cannon characters are happy that the uchiha are dead and want to kill them more. The typical characters like shisui and itachi hate the mc even more because he wouldn’t die quietly. All that bad shit that konoha does continues to come out and the people effected brash past it with no consequences. Tobirama Senju the initiator of the uchiha purge spends his time lamenting about how evil uchiha is, even though he spent his time as the kage, isolating them, killing them to do experiments and building a negative opinion of them. Why? Because they were too strong , that’s the reason, Sarutobi hiruzen is pathetic in this story, and acts like he’s a victim. The propagators of the genocide act like they are heroes and are constantly doing the woe is me routine. Jiraiya is as disappointing as always stupid shit like prophecy child is all he talks about, and being manipulated by the toads.the six paths with his vaunted stature talks about how irritating his puppet the mc stopped being puppeteers. He even agrees that uchiha are an evil clan, he says that his son Indra is evil. The person who sealed his mother into the moon, and won’t let his kids die, reincarnating them endlessly so they can fight for him . Is saying Indra is evil. The hypocrisy, It feels like I’m watching the shockwaves went you bully someone too much and he snaps and does something escalatory. In fact I think even the mc didn’t know how much damage he’d do. But the fact that everyone in konoha was twisted made the damage magnified infinitely.

It’s a alright story, the only downsides, that it’s following cannon, it’s also repetitive, and the biggest problem is that the mc never loses, no one dies. The protagonist with all his actions have not changed the cannon storyline, in fact some of his medical treatment plans could be seen as forcing cannon.

Look at the protagonist, author what are you trying to do. Death fruit, prince of an empire that fought the world government, to stand still has connections with rocks d xebec, father previous holder of death fruit. Know how he was born, his father took “young” girls and impregnated them , Super talented in all forms of haki, has two guards one who’s a genius swordsman and the other has an ancient zone fruit. he sits and his vaunted throne and all the plebs do shit for him. The mc aspires to be like his father. What’s the point fighting the celestial dragons he’s the same type as them, there’s literally no point to cheering for the mc, you’ve made his starting point too high. His reasoning too weak. Because of that story is uninteresting.

The mc is a hypocrite and loser, he runs around acting shady and killing pirates. But he doesn’t kill anyone important ever characters, even if they torture him, he’s also one of those mcs where he talks too much. He drops his meta knowledge on cannon characters and none of them kill him for it, like he dropped that knowledge of shanks being celestial dragon, and shanks did fuck all. He has a hard on for destroying pirates, he initially wanted to become a sequence god but then he turned into that unification trash that ruins all thes stories. From the mc mouth: Of course I do. I want to overthrow the World Government. I want to make those Celestial Dragons experience being the 'ants' and 'commoners' they speak of. I want to eliminate all pirates, establish a complete world system. I want people to live happily, to live in peace and prosperity, and for everyone to have a good life. He’s just a naive idealistic moron, who uses elementary grade logic to run around and categorise things as black or white while turning into a dictatorial fuck himself. In fact he’s aware of this himself. He says When the revolutionary takes over he enshrines himself as the emperor. So it’s just a Chinese Wuxia disguised as a one piece fic

Was going good, then it turned into hero complex protagonist, another one of these fics that talk about justice and peddle one dimensional goodness, talking about taking down celestial dragons and helping innocents. He’s trained by gravity guy marine. But gravity guy is stupidly naive. Protagonist spouts some shit from his past life and Gets gravity guy to change his mind. Gravity guy trains him on haki. Protagonist tells gravity guy to take down the celestial dragons and build a peaceful nation. Feels familiar right, no plans nothing to back up his words just idealistic bullshit that the gravity guy falls for. That set the tone for this story. The protagonist is one of those where he’s enamoured with himself all someone has to do is kiss his ass and flatter him and he’ll get involved with shit thats got nothing to do with him because he has a hero complex. This gets worse by people constantly calling him hero. I mean look at the stupid shit he says after conquering a nation. “My requirements are: first, control Sky Island and have the sole say; second, control intelligence of the sea, capable of providing accurate information to Liberty at all times; third, you can engage in any type of trade, but absolutely no burning, killing, looting, or committing heinous crimes; finally, surpass all dark forces and become the King of the Underworld of this sea!” He also is a coward, he doesn’t kill anyone important. He meets cannon characters and he either gets them to join him or he kisses up to them. He also keeps dropping knowledge that he shouldn’t know to everyone within hearing distance, for example he meets ace gets into a fight. Then immediately tells his crew that ace is Roger’s son. No one questions him. He meets robin and does the same shit about the poneglyphs, same thing. Again with crocodile and Pluto. Again, he’s just using his meta knowledge to flex on people and he’s not getting any push back at all. And everyone is so easily convinced all he has do is talk to them and they join his side.

I agree with the review from just_jam, it’s pretty good. The protagonist has a mythological fruit but he isn’t one of those protect innocents, unify the world types. Also he doesn’t chase women’s all the time or collect women. Cannon characters don’t like him inexplicably, white beard doesn’t like him, Charlotte linlin doesn’t like him, his captain kept him on a leash because he’s dangerous. He just wants war. He isn’t two faced. Everyone knows he’s the devil and he doesn’t preach about justice. He also isn’t too overpowered. He gets beat by the top dogs and it takes time for him to level up. His actions are having effects.

There’s too many plot holes with this story, mc has a system that lets him inherit powerful swordsmen from other comics/universes. He says he wants to be the strongest swordsman. That’s bullshit he started collecting people already, it’s like the stated goal is swordsman but the actual goal is collecting a harem of women on the side. He says he joins the marines for systematic training, but when he gets there he doesn’t get any. In fact all he has to do is kill people to get his system to develop. He shows off his talent and then everyone in the marines goes “wow” “monster” “amazing”. He only gets close to women. So far there’s been Zoros friend who the author changed her personality to turn her into a follower of the mc. Smoker chick, who goes “ so handsome” at the mc. And weapon girl who the mc wants because she could turn into different weapons. He talks about how cool it would be to use guns and missiles and nukes, the problem he’s a “swordsman”

How do you get taught by aizen and still go on about peace. The author made Naruto smart but his goal is stupid. The way he goes about fulfilling his goal is stupid. Aizen wanted to usurp soul society because he didn’t want those decrepitude old things acting like they were above him. He didn’t care about peace, he was selfish. The Naruto tought by aizen lacks conviction. He’s one dimensional, all people talk about is how kind Naruto he is. It starred with Naruto building seiretei and hollows. I can read the writing on the wall. It’s going down the unification trash route, . It’s not exceptional but it’s better than trash

It was going good, the writing reads like it’s been taken from ChatGPT. I was able to ignore that because I liked the characters personality, but the author threw it all away once he met gon and Killua, he spent so much time building up the protagonist as a lone wolf. Then he turns him into support for the cannon characters. Additionally the protagonist thinks in black or white. The reason he became enemy with the phantom troupe is because they slaughter innocents. What is this white knight crap. Especially in Hunter x Hunter world, where hunters aren’t good or bad people. He’s basically become a baby sitter for the cannon group.