the story is going fine, I just don't like it very much. the setting of people losing their memories of the game world after returning is essential to the story, but it creates very annoying minor social issues repeatedly. having the same conversations over and over again in reality isn't entertaining to me. also the hamfisted communism persecution isn't done very well imo. if the federation is earth in the future, why does it only seem to be 36 capitalist families from the china region who are running things? if they don't have memories of the game world like everyone else, how would they develop to become hegemonies to begin with? you're telling me that 1500 years later, mao Zedong's book is completely banned worldwide, so much so that people haven't even heard of the concept of communism? the dialogue is also pretty stilted and awkward imo. I think the 1 highlight is the MC is married with 2 kids and is probably not going to have a harem or anything.

...the MC is a fujoshi and a weeb. at least I think that's why there's 2 1 star reviews with no explanation. the story is quite good so far. I don't mind the MC's personality; I think it's quite fun. ETA 1: I think a downside to this story is a problem that a lot of femfreq cultivation stories have: people don't act their age, or they expect a lot from someone who is quite young. the MC is 12 years old around c67, but people are acting like her antics and pranks are totally unacceptable when kids do that. also the male lead seems to have feelings for the MC. idk if it's romantic feelings, but it's definitely creepy; he watches her sleep and hid in her cave abode when she wasn't there. also she seems to have picked up an amnesiac fiancé? it's a little odd, but nothing I'd condemn the story for yet. ETA 2: okay I think I can condemn it now. there's an overarching mystery that is not a mystery. it is very obvious that the MC has something to do with the OG!Xiaoxiao and super powerful characters in the book seem to have memories/impressions of the book's trajectories, but only the hot guys (🧐). the hot guys who are all very high in cultivation and age, and for some reason, are romantically interested in this visibly 12 year old girl. I think I'd give the story a 3.5/5. my arguments for why I'm dnfing but giving it a high score is other than the age thing, everything else seems well planned out and structured. everyone has a distinct personality and motives for the way they act. it's not all cookie cutter personalities. it really is the age old argument again: if the MC was a legal adult in her last life, died and transmigrated into a child, should she have love interests her own physical age or her own mental age? my answer is to stop 🛑 can you not time skip 20 years and start the romantic plotlines there. bro why is she 12 and a grown ass man is plotting to seduce her. why is she so stupid and oblivious about this.

I don't understand the review that says this is yaoi written by a female author. this reads very much like what a straight man thinks becoming a woman is like. the MC becomes a woman and the first thing she does is implied to be "exploring herself". then it takes time to describe her new body in a very fetishy way, with "attribute" measurements for hip, bust and waist ratio. this isn't in the lord world, this is before. she even puts on a sailor outfit!! she was just sleeping naked, and then decides to casually wear a sailor outfit and high socks??? then comes the global transmigration into the lord game, and she gets a wardrobe with a ton of clothes and she drools over the idea of her own underwear again. there's instances where the MC can't do maths easily anymore, and it's implied it's because she's a woman now, so she's ditsy. the lord game is interesting to read about, but I really, really can't put up with and read past the fetishy nature of the MC herself.

i have to say: deciding to temporarily retreat in the face of an AK pointed at you when you only have a pistol is not being a noob. an AK is a machine gun. a pistol can fire only one bullet at a time. there is a significant interval, and that pause can make the MC become full of bullets. wdym not taking revenge when the person was strangled, my good buddy below they're evolved humans who have been here for months/years and the MC has been here for 1 day. there is a process for the MC to increase his strength and become mega OP. give the story a chance, man. about the story: I think it's pretty interesting. the MC isn't OP at the start, and it takes time to snowball into dominating everything. it reminds me of games like seven days to die with the crafting and building components. there's a couple of times where the MC/narrative voice will say something that was absolutely not common knowledge and act like the reader should obviously know this. it happens twice in 15 chapters and I don't think the raw is missing a paragraph. I think it's a fine read. the author falling over themselves to reassure us that the MC won't keep a woman is a little strange, though. the MC is also apparently mentally ill, forcing a woman he just met to kill people who provoked him just to prove she's not a burden? the story is odd but interesting. solid 3.5/5

literally nothing wrong with it. there's no racism or nationalism, other countries don't even make a peep almost 100 chapters in. there's no excessive horny language whenever a woman shows up either. it just doesn't focus only on numbers go up. it's more about personal relationships between the MC, his friend IRL, his friends in game, guild members, game enemies... there really hasn't been a stat page in a while unless it's a new item or equipment set that is a significant upgrade. it's definitely not bad, but I can see why someone would think it's boring. fights also aren't really explained well since most monsters one-shot themselves to death. if you think numbers go up in this genre is boring, you can try this one. if you like numbers go up, go read something else. this is definitely not that.

I don't think I agree with the statement that this story is the author venting negative emotions. it is surprisingly quite a chill read. I was expecting something with more gore. either way, the MC is someone who has lived in an apocalyptic hell space of a society for 28 years. it is extremely normal for him to have some mental problems and be very misanthropic. conversely, he is also quite rational, and makes his own morals. if someone tries to morally kidnap him, they will get stabbed. chunnibyu teens don't get stabbed; he just asks them to clean up the zombies in the building, so they learn how to fight on their own and won't rely on him. he inadvertently saves a woman who was being tortured in a construction site later, and he does give her some of his limited food. like do I think the MC needs a therapist? yes. do I think he's a villain? no. about the story: it is very, very slow. 7 days of doomsday is 15 chapters. the MC also doesn't actually really talk to people at all. people talk to him or around him, and most of the novel is pure narrative text. I don't see that getting better until way later, too. also the author has the habit of telling and not showing, mainly bc there's barely any dialogue. all of this could change later on, this is just first impressions. I might finish this, it's just a very depressing, slow read.

up to here, there's no catgirl. it's a female cat with telepathy powers. he doesn't treat the cat as anything but a cat. this could change later obviously, idk, I'm not finishing it. about the story: it's a little boring for me. it starts out very traditional; stock up space, infinitely replenishing space, reborn MC. but then the space has mysteries, and he seems to be able to travel worlds? and it lost me there. reading the story, we've barely scratched the surface of how the zombie apocalypse ended up happening on earth, but we're already going to a "new chapter" to explore more things. I personally don't like to read stories where the mystery just keeps getting bigger and bigger and isn't ever resolved. this feels less like a new arc and more like piling on, like the author is already bored with the story 50 chapters in and is starting fresh, but in the same book.

the translation got really difficult to read all of a sudden. super disjointed, jumping and missing paragraphs. the raw seems to be the same, so idk what the issue is. about the story: I think it's fine, if a little empty. the MC was tricked into a slave contract in his last life, so in this life he's not signing his life away again. he doesn't have to fight as a blacksmith, so it's a lot of afk forging and the story happening around the MC. I wouldn't say it's bad, it just doesn't grab my attention enough to struggle through the bad translation.

1v1 is a lie. the MC is a master manipulator when it comes to men. I don't think she has had less than 2 partners at all. it's well written and the stories are fun to read if you like reverse harems.