seems like author doesn't know much about fighting scenes like when he describe the fighting scene he only mentions the enemy next move not how he screams is he in anger or is he in pain not even basic touch up like sword enters the flash "kechak" words like this

it was going on good tell more realities was involved and then the propaganda of Chinese infrastructure and how Japanese is always inferior to them even in normal conversations they some home mention how Japanese are devils etc and then how even if he is using an American games system the Chinese infrastructure is top and I don't know how he presses e and right clicks in reality to access the backpack because he always mention to right click. He is building a Subway under city of 5 million people and he is saying to hide his travel he will let the golem go in advance on a car so isn't that wasting the fuel that has consumed unnecessarily like can't you just go on that car

it's a bit unsettling always how Chinese mc goes to japan and then start saying how china is superior and all Japanese products are inferior like over a period of time it just gets irritating it gets irritating and revolting of how the MC doesn't treat women as real person but as npc by constantly reacting to them or reaching to them on the basis of favourability if the favourability is high he doesn't care even he neglect or does something bad and he does not even try to communicate with them when the favorability is high

same as @Hoaqin i didn't like the fact that newbies has to compete for their reward like why not give it to them when the score is being delivered.and his skill gene researcher is a technological skill but is used as a magical skill like put samples and do some experiments and mc will get the whole properties table for the shit like how

information type novel very basically receive information using the rain Tao

I don't know why the authors are forcefully inserting lines that may seem like comedy instead are making that story boring

I hate this so could nonsense of starting to find breathing technique to find or conceal to be lowkey and this one is no different and later on when the MC has just improved a little bit strength he starts to become too courageous like he starts to phrase curiosity overcome fear it almost sent me to a coma due to laughing so hard

story is good but the content is slow paced and has a lot of water content basically things that required 2 to 3 sentences fill up one paragraph . story was going on good but the introduction on insects seem's like a system panel but according to the MC is research through test then why whenever he encounters something first he will give introduction and then he will copy the same thing in system panel format because that is just repetitive writing and trying to fill the word limit of the chapter and confusing as hell the mc didn't even learn a basic spell like Fireball or spirit rain etc that will help him but no he is always making the animal fight for him he is not even trying to fight like I know he is a druid but that doesn't mean that druid doesn't fight personally and even after that this is immortal cultivation novel but still I have not seen him use a single spell till now if that's going to happen why not just make a western theme novel first of all he wears a black cloth to hide his identity but then just because he bought the fire crow from the men now suddenly he wants to be friend with him not caring that people will be eyeing his money or will try to Harm him