This is brilliant story! The climax is a bit rushed i think but still brilliant nevertheless.

Its not bad, mc is mature and rational. Its just theres a big flaw in this story, the Mc ate the longevity fruit at the start which makes him have a very long lifespan thousands of years at least and he always said to never take risk and be stable, but the thing is what he did is the opposite most of the time he acted based on emotion and he takes risk everywhere like some desperado like man chill you got thousands of years of lifespan why are you so desperate? And one thing that left me confused is that the mc really likes to create burden for himself.

Its pretty good, just that theres too many annoying supporting character and most of them are so useless its frustrating. And the Mc is a big hypocrite too, much worse than Han Jue.

Its pretty good

Its good Edit: i finished reading it already. Well its good overall,just one point that makes me feel inexplicable, imagine the Mc became Omnipotent and Omniscient being yet still being Chinese racist at the same time. Can you imagine it? If there is Allmighty and Allknowing existence, but this supposedly Allmighty God is a chinese racist? Its funny yet horrifying to think about haha

Its good just that theres too much water and the Mc is not resolute enough always changing his mind over every single thing

Its so-so,theres too much loophole in the story one of which Mc system or his merit scroll which supposed to identify those who are wicked but it failed many times the best example is the city lord Gao from the first arc that guy are clearly a big villain but Mc cheat didnt work for some reason its a major plothole its disapointing

Theres too much drag in immortall arc,we read this for mc to kill and bulldoze everything not for stupid plot why bother

Theres just too much lame villain in this story,just imagine ordinary person with no strenght at all make threat to the mc time and time again its like really ridiculous for example those capitalist who have great power but with no matching strenght,mc can easily pinch them to death yet they still behave so arrogantly its perplexing. Oh and the progression is just too slow its become somewhat borring dragging on.