Sometimes I just wonder if authors got kicked in the head while writing books ? His first martial soul is a needle utter trash and he does not even add spirit rings to it ????Dude did you even try reading and understanding douluo before fucking it up in your fanfiction ??????????? Also I really don't understand story pace , almost 200 chapters and he has only gone from level 40 to level 50 ?????what was the point of stealing bingdi you horny motherfucker when you don't even have a 100000 year old spirit ring from her Author should think before writing shit , his new cultivation method can help him practice ten times faster , then tell me can a person who became a titled douluo in 30 years become one in 3 years ?? so why is he only at level 50 after 1 year now ?????????

Simp bottom pushover coward mc of the greatest level , fuck you author don't bring your maso tendencies to us ......also he's so coward uhhhhh🤢🤢🤢 Not to mention the utmost cringe writing 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

Too many problems I'm not even taking the liberty to mention them Summary: A cuck , virgin , nerd author's fantasy and his wet dream in douluo world , my god how wish fulfilment can be this trash is beyond my understanding ....

trashiest book i ever read , if you decide to read this book be ready to die of frustration , its just constant face slapping with mc constantly being underestimated , no matter how many times he shows his spirit rings he wont get famous , people will still underestimate him and again there will be face slapping , this repititive trash routine is all there is to this trash book Douluo logic is fucked up every other minute for no reason at all , gets a 50000 year old 3rd spirit ring and then a 10000 year old 4th one , planned to get a red 5th spirit ring and then still got black one and xuan zi was happy not disappointed , author fuck you I want to torture and kill you for writing this frustrating piece of shit Every progressing chapter fucks up douluo logic and even choices that mc makes are so brainless you'll die from frustration . Just think he was going to kill a 800000 year old evil eye tyrant but before that he absorbed a 100000 year old head soul bones which was 8 times weaker than it ..!!!!!motherfucker sisterfucker father fucker madhar chod

Fuck you asshole if you hate xiaogang kill him , letting him stay alive like a roach and disgust us you fucking 2 but idiot author He did not show his spirit rings and cultivation even once and kept face slapping whole fucking book ...so irritating fuck you author

Who tf even wrote this mega fuck up of a story ........no one knows what the hell is happening , old jack has system ?

Trash acts like he is not scared of anybody but fucking hypocrite coward hides his spirit ring colour , even coward like huo yuhao did not do it , this trash is even worse For some reason this fucker's character is even worse and more irritating than that idiot tang san Also acts like he is impotent or gay When rumoured to be gay he made no attempt to correct it ? I feel like author has some homo fetish , fucking disgusting....

Irritating , he's a pussy and kills nobody let's them abuse and disrespect him and his women , fucking coward Thinks completely with his dick , half his harem are used woman especially Zhu zhuyun , in fact he has a kind of fetish and even prefers used women which made me disgusted Also zhuyun continued staying with dai weisi means she was still sleeping with him even after confirming relationship with mc even if undercover to prevent star luo empire from knowing 🤢🤢🤢

Author with good heart but trash brain ? Entering spirit tool department in a school where spirit tool department isn't even good and choosing spirit tools in an era where they haven't even developed yet ? Gave shitty reason that a 1000 years later maybe spirit tools will threaten gods , but you idiot what about you ? Audience here wanna read the story not speculate thousand year future of an insignificant fic , bro has such shit luck even destiny was surprised , got two external spirit bones for first two rings ????? It's like author does not want views at all ? Who tf likes to read a support system mc in a douluo fic ? Your mother drop you when you were a child that you got this retarded ? And then there's trash low key acting tendencies too .....truly a trash author hiding spirit ring colour , coward Not to mention he managed to write possibly the most annoying and irritating mc ever He is so lame rejected martial department so decisively and chose spirit tools so confidently but later realized he was a fucking fool and could not even make spirit tools and could only use them 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Fucking idiot son of a bitch retard author instead of increasing soul power quickly and becoming a god this fucker is using points to buy several million year soul bones ? You motherfucker soul bones that strong required a lot of soul power , how is a trash weakling like you supposed to use it ?