What kind of stupid writer is this!? Why do you keep describing every single thing about the current focus!? What use is a story when you put everything out in the open like this at this point just make a wiki article and get it over with. It would be fine if it was in dialog but no that's just the description of the object. Suggestion for any future fan-fiction you're going to write, you don't need to describe like this because the people reading fan-fiction have probably seen the source material and also know the story. I'm so annoyed by this I've come back to edit this several times just to find better tell you how terrible this is.