Very thoughtful author...good novel

Very entertaining... No stretching of single topic....i like that system is not juming around to increase word count and there is lot of story....in most novel author stretch atmost 100 chapter in qi refining realm but here not even 20 chapter...

Excellent writing.it has everything. no nonsensical system constantly giving task and just doing anything. Not a idiotic patriotic mc who wants to die for country where there no no law and order. Appearance of heroine is just right neither too much or too little. Also no break up at start (bored with that too) I m little bored with swords too but not much good options in that area.

Cheat is good...story is bit weird....outer sect disciples is only cultivating with mortals and inner sect is not cultivating with outer sect....if cheat can change anything then why not his cultivation talent...then comes the weird cultivation technique which is totally unnecessary....

Mc cause trouble everywhere....a man who was high level cultivator in his previous life should be more wise, not a hot blooded youngter....he is pill emperor so why doesn't he just poison his enemies secretly...

Novel is good, but mc is absent in so many chapters. I almost feel like mc is not using his cheat properly.

Very good writing, excellent plot

Very good novel...good point of view....people who are good to harry potter does'nt mean they are good people....snape is death eater, he is willing to repent and die for hp. Does its have anything to do with other children of school..i have read most of hp fanfics with more than 100 chapters and this novel is 1st which attracted me which doesn't hv a harem....