I'm not sure about the future but for now it kinda seems okayish but some stuff is annoying first I need to be cleared about these abilities he's getting are they like one time or permanent if permanent that's good ..also hope he'd make himself stronger too in future cuz no one's gonna follow a captain weaker than themselves even if he has moria and weibull to clean up the mess he makes And last thing I need to complain is why does every damn author thinks yeah just cuz you got god's avoidance and conqueror haki you are invincible? Bro what's the point of all this if your strength is piss poor you do realise whether roger or shanks their normal strength is also ridiculous shanks took a blade from whiteboard and didn't even budge an inch so you need to be strong for this to work not just cuz you have god avoid and you become emperor level and what kinda of ridiculous logic is this dragon just met him and told him his whole life experience and stuff like why tf he would do that even if you wanna make mc important don't do bs like that What the hell he's not even thinking about being strong himself he's like should I give top level armament haki to wei bull you dumb ass he can do it easily with his physique what about you? You should try to get stronger with cheats does a monster like weibull even needs them? He's giving akin a chicken soup about being stronger but is not getting stronger himself i really hate bastard mc like him even a freaking girl is working but despite having system he's useless like no body is asking him to be op but at least try to keep getting stronger otherwise who's gonna listen to you And he's even telling his abilities to everyone if it wasn't for the fact that his crew is smart it's done why does this guys feels more gullible and pathetic than Luffy ffs

Garp does have conquerer haki right? Or am i tripping? Also what's with the chunni attitude of shouting justice all the time

It's fine so far but I really don't get what's the obsession of chinese authors to make their mc look like 18 yr old while he's 11or 12 and increase his body development early on it doesn't make sense whatsoever and why's he going to shrek if he's not a friend with tang san also the lovely dovey of mc with xioa wu is annoying and he's already level 34 he should be thinking about fire and ice spring by now to not only increase his strength but also find the flower that can hide xiao wus identify and then just join royal academy or something it's simple but no I'm 100 percent sure this incel author is waiting for cat girl zhu so he's wasting time here And stop acting like a pathetic sap talking about revenge every chapter you don't even know them tbh and lastly this freaking harem mentality and even worse justifying it like he's so awesome he can have more girls like if the girl is awesome would you allow her to f**k randos everyday and what's the bs with zhu girl always asking these mcs to cultivate her like come on get a life I'd be at least respect you if you only choose her but no just have to jump in every boat Now I'm really done what's with the stupid attitude of spoiling them for no reason and even making them feel as if they can't eat sausage made by oscar literally even a bigger hypocrite than tang san and his own spirit skills are useless but he keeps blabbering about how oscars situation is bad bro it's a third soul skill who's gonna use them later on either way and why's he acting like a retardated tang san while knowing xiao wu is a beast and nothing's gonna happen to her Also too much exaggeration he's not level 40 and he's saying people at level 50 can't defeat him when he's just using trash blue silver yeah right he doesn't have those weapons and skills that tang san has why's he flying so much Bleh he didn't even leave that dusty old slut erlong disgusting

I'd never understand people's obsession with changing fates like saiyans here or Uchiha in Naruto like both the races are simply scum except for a few let them die who tf cares about them , universe 7 is better off without them especially when saving them involves facing a big boss like beerus And last but not least the one with cheat is mc not these guys so i really hate when they act like every saiyan can become super strong like in Naruto fanfic every freaking uchiha would open mangekyo no you can't their talent is still the same they're scum at best but somehow they'd make them have more progress then real protagonist like vegeta and goku And it just gets so boring when you start a db fanfic with op cheats right from the birth night as well start it right before the start of dbz that way it's at least fun and interesting

Sounds a lot of bs to me that he killed madara lol it's so damn silly and somehow he keeps getting stripping entries more than copy shouldn't this be other way around after all copying only works for himself but striping is literally out of rules and ridiculous where he can make an enemy weak and he doesn't seem to know what he's writing which tsuchikage had lava style in Naruto? Like bro are you just making shit up

I was in mood to read this but it's so annoying when the progress is so fast and second i can already see they have introduced mei terumi they'd revolve around her for no reason like bro unlike us they're enemies who'd kill each other like literally this generation doesn't have time for flirting for no reason and also i know he's type when mc doesn't know how to hide his edge and will keeps showing things that doesn't make sense but author will force the sense on it bleh like someone as smart as minato is thinking he can copy kekei genkai like wtf is that rather he'd think he awakened it and why does he need to show it right away can't he freaking wait then he can simply say he developed it himself but no he used it right there so annoying and stupid One moment before he gained all that power he was like it's understandable why people hate Uchiha we have such a big police department and we didn't share it with anyone blah blah next as soon as he becomes strong yeah fuck them who cares if they hate us they can't say anything either way so I'd grab even more stuff like wth man lol that way you are just giving rise to unnecessary conflicts I really don't get how you could say net eye is so op and all when the abilities it posses are so ordinary i hope it has some setting later on that proves useful otherwise it's a waste really Also as time went on why did this guy started acting as if he can't see others entries he was able to see them before no? Now he just shouts at system to extract the brightest entry without checking

It's kinda pathetic how he needs to go and groom Hermione from start cuz I'm not against age gap lol like if he goes for that girl called fleur or something from triwizard tournament it'd be fine why? First she was already an adult at that time she came , second he didn't have any contact with her so it's not like here where he's literally grooming Hermione so it'd be fine cuz the age gap between them is barely less than 5-6 years and he didn't do anything weird to her when she was a child but where he's literally grooming hermonie from when she's a kid that's disgusting and the worst part is unlike other mcs he's not even same age as her he's literally freaking 11 years older even in this life let alone the previous

So far it's good and tbh I have been looking trying to find invincible fanfics but can't find one so if anybody knows do share ;p

Like seriously Minato literally captured a full nine tails within minutes which third hokage and others couldn't do and then Kushina suppressed it instantly and you are telling me a nine tails which is btw already inside seal and is only leaking bit of chakra to errode Kushina can overpower them both ? Such dumb writing in this whole fight minato was just watching bleh like come on he knows pretty much all sealing justu he can literally slap a pseudo jinchurki down instantly but somehow he's helpless and Obito is the one who did it bs bs bs bs author has no concept of jinchirki the reason nine tails could errode Naruto was first he wasn't strong enough second his seal was designed by minato in a way that it leaks so Naruto can get used to it then what about Kushina she has a far more solid seal so much so that nine tails couldn't even move let alone do the bs they showed here and just cuz Obito is mc here don't shit on Kushina and minato as if they need a brat to deal with a sealed kurama And that dumb intelligence saying that they found out hanzo weakness do you really think this is first time they met hanzo on battlefield and didn't know he has a poisonous sack they know it's simply cuz he's very strong coupled that with his summoning beast who's also very strong it's practically impossible to attack him closely and also they literally vanished before hanzo could even spot them to over 20kms yet they caught up such dumb writing and since when did a few elites scared minato author keeps shitting on him as if he has forgotten that it was him who killed so many stone ninjas that onoki had to retreat from land of fire altogether and minato even has reverse summoning why would he fight madara to death not to mention why'd madara fight them for no reason it's ridiculous .. people in fanfiction keeps forgetting there's a freaking reason madara had to hide at this time first nagato can't use rinnegan yet so they can't revive himself and he's dying barely surviving with gedo statue not like how they show him

Another idiot who acts as if he's a babysitter in name of cooperation really ruined a story that could have been awesome Doesn't eat monsters ,acts like some kind of spoiled brat and says a thing no reincarnator said ever too much skills are useless... like as if you dumb af idiot and maybe it's cuz I don't know this zongli charcter from genshin impact or whatever but why tf are all fanfic author so obsessed with his shitty skills that they keep trying to turn all mcs in their novel in same way