It's too long, there are a lot of events, and for some reason everything is connected with the main character. the abilities of the characters are greatly reduced, both comic book characters and their movie versions, for example, the dream ruby with the power of one of the endless family turned out to be weaker than Thanos with the infinity gauntlet, although even in comics where the infinity stones are stronger than the movie version, they cannot affect abstractions (death, eternity, infinity, etc. further), the analogue of which is the dream (the sandman) from the DC world. the author also knows nothing about Marvel, as well as the filmmakers. who can have a farm of infinity stones in one universe by simply collecting them in a "reflection of reality", although in fact it will already be a parallel universe and the stones from it will not work.

it's pretty boring, there's too much unnecessary information and inserts on behalf of secondary, and sometimes even completely unrelated characters in the plot.

how do these authors manage to make a cultivation novel out of Marvel, the main character becomes the "savior" of China in any world where he is, and the main character ends up in China, oh, that is, "Huaxia". there is a typical "mental pollution" for cultivators. Although the author writes about ADHD/PTSD, ADHD/PTSD does not appear simply from killing... the main character simply did not have any situations in which this disorder could develop... the maximum is his inability to quickly adapt to the real world and its laws. but this is not "mental pollution." Let's see what happens next. how should the main character protect a hobbit and at the same time kill a dragon and 5,000 orcs, if he does not even have time to reach the mountain in half a year? The dwarves reached the mountains in about 7 months. Gandalf is not human. In fact, he is a god (Ainu), just being in middle-earth, his powers and memories are sealed. I also have some questions about the lottery. what prevents you from choosing a keyword like "divinity"? it will either give you divinity, which will make you a god, or an object with that very divinity. There's not as much range as in magic or martial arts. but at the moment the situation is not good.

The theory of magic in this book is, of course, nonsense that contradicts itself... If a person can't transform his magic without a wand, then how did Harry Potter teleport? Did he make the glass disappear and then appear? How did a noseless man in a shelter cause a fire? and so on and so forth. any childish magical outburst refutes these theories. transfiguration is also strangely described, that is, people who make transfiguration out of thin air change the internal structure of what? Let me remind you that there are a lot of different gases in the air, with different structures... Magic is a magical power, it just blew my mind. Here you are looking at the person in the mirror, who is it, go what? That's right, it's an accumulation of atoms, but I think that's not what the author meant, just because he's dumb. Well, if you can't come up with a theory of magic that doesn't contradict what's in the original or what you write yourself, then don't write it, leave the magic unexplained and that's it...

How old was the main character when he died? Why is he so mentally retarded?