Mediocre. It's very messy but the author tries to make something special. Maybe he tried to do too much.

if the series has that much football knowledge as what was showed in chapter 4 it's worth 5 stars.

loving it for now honestly. The MC is witty and funny with his retorts but he has purpose. He knows he's killing people to get stronger and he doesn't care as he chose to put himself first. No extra thoughts, no feelings in the way. I can't wait to see what's next. I hope he never changes, that his blade arm remains strong and his heart cold to all his enemies.

not worth reading after he got the split personnality thing. What i liked best about the MC was his behavior and his restraint. The "evil self" starts with a rape. i'm good on that. before that story was 4 stars. It's 1 start now i'm quitting there

I got to the end. The author seemed to have more plans but the book not finding a reader base was ended at a somewhat satisfying point. The MC is goten and we follow him as he decides to become the strongest in the multiverse. The book is light hearted. There is absolutely nothing extra just goten fighting to trigger his system then training the rest of the time. There have been some slice of life parts but nothing to bad. As I said in the opening sentence the author didnt find readers so in order to give himself more chances he tried to bring in more female characters around the mc at the end but yeah... overall I don't think I'll read it again but I was entertained by this novel.

Average, I enjoy this kind of fanfictions. It's not as bad as some out there. The harem is a subplot really. He has very good relationships with a few named women in the series but he's focused on getting stronger. As the author said this book is as straight to the point as he could make it. I won't be reading it again but i enjoyed the first time around.

It's a odd one. The diary spin is pretty good. What makes me rate this novel so low is that the guy is 23 says that he is not a pedophile then less than 10 chapters later makes out with a 12 year old in the toilets of an auction house. Another thing like that and I'll be dropping this.

Was fun until.he decided to bend and participate in the tournament. I quit there i might force myself to pick it back up again at a later date

pretty decent, MC is fine. I get the parallels with tang san but they should stop after the spirits. Tang san is a sect slave this guy was a normal novel reading guy. His character is even, he has grudges and gratitude. The world is fine and the novel isn't all about bullying the unkillable roach tang san. The harem can feel a little forced though. The main issue for me is the chapter problems after 320. It makes it impossible for me to read from there hopefully it is fixed with the next upload.