Too much nonsense and too much burden.💩💩💩 He is doing everything to the point where I don't know what kind of mortal to immortality is going on🤮🤮🤮. Distorted to the point of beyond recognition.🤢🤢 Totally poison 🤮. At your own risk if you want to read this shit.

Waste of time 🤮. I don't know what kind of fun they have by showing off and face slapping 💩💩💩. Just got some money and there you go showing off face slapping where is the low key element go I don't know 🤢🤢🤢.

Good for passing time. Negative point: the writer has short term memory loss problem 🤢🤢🤢, he usually forgot what kind of personality he has given to mc in just 2 chapter, like initially he gives the mc low key and not attract attention personality and then if you know you know 💩💩💩💩💩💩.

Trash 💩💩. I really don't understand what kind of comdey it is to make a fool of your self 🤮🤮. No self respect just your typical chinese horney brain dead mc with dog licking personality 🤢🤢. I just don't understand what kind of man they want to be by liking a girl who disrespect them just totally dog licking behaviour 💩💩💩.

Mc is doing nothing just fucking here and there some sluts and making them his women. I just want to ask him really just really. Waste of time 🤮. In just 1st chapter u will know what is going to happen in future 💩. Not a man just a Simp and brain dead dude. Everything is just writer low iq. Full novel is based on Plot armor. If u know u know 🤢.

Low iq mc. Protected by plot otherwise if you know you know 💩. Totally nonsense 🤢. Try hard to make a good novel and then suddenly make it nonsense 💩. It was good at start and then go down very quick 🤮.

Too much show off 💩💩 Too much nonsense 🤢🤢

Concept of swallowed star 🤮🤮 with low quality. Author wants to make the mc kill immortal with qi refining 😂😂😂😂😂😂. Tooo much foundation shit🤮. I don't know there will be any one in this novel who will have more foundation than him.😂😂😂😂🤣

To much water To much show off Not cautious mc NAIVE MC LSP MC SIMP MC SHOWING POWERFUL CHARACTER THAT HE HAS SOME SECRET THAT HELP HIM TO GET ENLIGHTENMENT OUT OF NOWHERE. 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮