The pacing of this story is slower than expected, but on deeper reading, that's what's expected. This is the type of story you read if you actually want the Cyberpunk experience--with the depressing feeling of never winning. For someone looking for any level of power fantasy, this isn't it, but the point of web stories is power fantasy on some level.

Decent idea, executed poorly, but written coherently.

Might be good if you're into this kind of thing, but the MC doesn't act like someone who has trained for eight hundred years, or even thirty years, and the other group members tend to act overly familiar and even more immature. This can be very annoying and a deal breaker for many people.

Too much action

The beginning was somewhat incoherent. Gets better, but not much...

It's alright, but the MC lacks a sense of even participation. You're really just looking at "author's favorite characters playing with each other while the author-insert plays referee". So for those looking for an active MC, this isn't it.

A little bit too much edginess and ruthlessness that make the MC cringe, but the story is coherent and the MC's growth path is exactly what the summary says it is; an urban anime villain. The story is decently thought out and it includes some depths of details that most stories of this genre don't include (such as Ryuju Momo's background as a yakuza family acting differently compared to a zaibatsu family or a political clan).