There so much nonsense and a lot of no logic shits His system will kill him in every quest He sucks at playing behind the scenes boss In the end it is just another mc who like to show off

Just a waste of time No logic no brain and mc sucks

He spent too much time on eldin ring game and didn't get more big games just the usual focked up small games His system can give him a clone he used it and then made a alot of shits and fused it Why the fuck not keep it and use your synchronisation opportunities to get his status to you while keeping the clone to use in game and reality And alot of stuff are there for no reason just to make more words

It is nice but there is some rushed points Other than that the story, background and writing are all good I liked the romance in this one not too much and the story behind it was really good If i had to say : it is in top 10 harry Potter fanfiction i have read

Start fun and good Then it turns sooo bad it stinks Firstly he has no logical thinking and cannot understand or figure out anything on his own He needs to spend like 100 chapters digging to know waoow those coffins with deathly Hallows on them more than ones and i already know ravenclaw has a left hand of the god who was kelled and the other 4 parts are with other races or something let's spend time and not have any idea or guess what it is Secondly he is so bad at using his system like your system can make you a god but he keeps ignoring it or spend every 50 chapters or 100 chapters with no progress He won't search for new tasks and he won't do the old ones No progress in real magic too he always use same moves and won't learn new shits Loke if i was like him o can devour books and memories them instantly i would buy copy and even steal any book i see to devour the knowledge on them He didn't use it once Fuk you and fuk him and fuk the time i spent reading this book

No magic no harry Potter Mc just turned from England to China number one in few chapters He has to spend money on anything but himself like beggars He can throw 1 billion on shits but can't have few thousands to buy clothes or give to his parents All the time he acts like a hypocrite and i don't know what the point of this novel Just don't waste your time on it Not even read a few chapters It is a disaster

Just awful Chinese shits all over the place Mc background sucks , he has all of wizarding world and he is renting it to people Not to mention he keep teaching people Chinese stuff out his ass and expect people to be like him china fanatics aszholes And everyone accepted that he became a teacher at Hogwarts at 12 years old while he was in a coma for 10 years hahahhahahaha WTF is the problem with this stupidity

He keep changing stuff out his asz He don't have a good memory about harry potter story He kept waiting for a month for them to come get him while he didn't send a reply to the school Voldemort keeping him out of all students to do his work is stupid and has no reason And what is even worst he singing a Contract with the twin brothers that they will lose there magic over a prank on snap is outrageous

Not to mention that he is just another aszhole fron China but he kept saying half-blood and shits out of nowhere And the professor just dumped him after getting the money and left WTF is wrong with you and your facts And he keeps saying stupid things to harry, ron and Hermione The story is just awful