this novel is disappointing. the first part of the plot is good i liked the characteristics of the mc but on the middle part i don't know if it's cause by character development but the mc turned into an generic hiding his strength cliche it's kinda annoying since you can see the plot a mile away, and the annoying thing is why would the author keeps on inserting bussiness into the mc life he's not suitable for it since he doesn't need that kind of money and it does not fit for his character it's like the author is forcing it, and the war with the ai that's neverending wtf the author just keeps on milking the plot with ai I think he's planning to make the ai the final boss it's kinda trashy , and another one the plot keeps on changing that goes nowhere at all while the people is suffering the author has the guts to add some highschool mecha plot to the novel he just bouncing off from one school to another,and the way the mc reacts to people that he's working with is lacking of emotion it's kinda disturbing I don't know if the author doesn't know what grief is but safe to say it makes the mc lacks empathy and the last part the greatest poison of Chinese novels the effing girls there's too many girls that the mc has potential love interest with it's pissing me off reading it the mc doesn't have any decent male competitors the author just keeps on bringing girls like wth are you building a dozens of harem? sigh I lost my motivation to read this. anyway goodluck to the peope who will read this in rhe future
the nationalism is pretty obvious it feels uncomfortable reading it even if they change the name of a certain country you still recognized what it is, and the way author Speedrun his resources collection and blatantly plunder things is really mind boggling. His system is op and there's no clearly a task to do it just finished suddenly, but the most annoying thing is he didn't do anything to at least inform the government about the incoming apocalypse or at least help instead he just coldly look at people suffering, even if he suffered from his previous life by betrayal it's not justified considering that he clearly know what will happen in the apocalypse and h didn't do shit is crazy the author might just made a short and braindead novels it's like he's milking it
at first the novel is good because it's detailed, it's the plot that confusing me since it's all over the place, and there's many plothole and the author seems just shrugged the details of what happen and why, and the world building is lacking, and the weid part is all of mc potential interest is young girls...
The fact that the whole story was decided after the system randomly choose the whole being of the mc is just straight out of trash, the mc didn't get a chance to choose while he's still in shock instead the system did for him is mind boggling it's like he's already in controlled the system and it's really annoying when the system is a loli it's not that serious anymore if the mc will become a chaotic evil the system is trash
The impression that I had when read this novel would be full of magic and actions, but no there's too many misunderstanding about the mc capabilities it's being forced to make the much cooler when it's annoying I can bear a few times since it's acceptable but the thing is it happened many times it makes the side characters sloppy, and the flow of the story is so slow that it's like a snail too many details on some random bs that's not being connected to the current plot it and I can't even see the magics that he practice or the others it just full of the characters daily life without progressin, damn it got in my nerves the plot didn't progress and for some reason the mc has a kink for milk that's fine...I guess? ad mind you I don't know if the mc is dumb or just stupidly plain dumb when others are bullying and he doesn't fight back whick I understand because he's weak but be didn't use it as a reason to become stronger and the worse part is he doesn't practice hard enough it feels like he forgot his dying mentor poor him...with a limit of 5 year and he's wasting his time thinking about random bs that doesn't help with his practice sigh. I'll try reading more chaps let see if there's some progress
damn remembering that I've read this novel before hurts my eyes it's the ultimate edgy novel that's full of bragging overpowered mc the wet dreams of losers. I can't just stomach the mc morality, that he's been in a civilized world and the moment he reincarnated he becomes a jackass looking down at people like you don't deserve that dumbass, and the way he died and starts a new life in the enemy just ended my braincells I cant forgive the author for making me lose brain cells recommended for newbie? but for the vets hell no
the moment I read the word sigma I knew that the novel is done. It's the same jerk mc again being an asshole and a smartass, for a novel that's been based of GoT there's nothing serious about it, it just keeps on throwing some disturbing details and just joked about and shrugged it off, for a man that's been transmigrated his adaptability is interesting eh? and finally the overpowered mc who just cut the enemies like grass there's no struggle whatsoever, I thought it would be good but sadly it just hurt my eyes I don't know what chinese keeps on fumbling making a fanfiction about mount and blade sucks. The author should've just make a comedy about everyday life not suitable for Kingdom building since the beauty of it was the struggles and development
the framework of the apocalypse is good and the pacing is great it's realistic since it's the apocalypse, but the things that bug me is the Chinese poison is working again with the harem troupe again it's exhausting to read and the fact that the mc has tendency to become pedo is down right disturbing and the mc keeps on wasting opportunities he didn't explore things and it works the evolution is wasted to him tbh, and the way the author keeps on making the mc subordinates girls, already can see the harem. and finally the mc doesn't have goals he just keeps on floating randomly and the plot adjust to his needs it lacks adversity it's trash
what the heck, the plot is so chaotic there's is many different plot going on without progressing the pace is so slow and the way the author defined how advanced the technology and the mc character suddenly can do anything without suffering from his doing it's like making the technology useless in front of him when he's just starting his system, his system is trash it's overpowered and useless at the same time cowardly with no brains to think of without fully utilizing his abilities, I think the only thing that's good in this novel is when he's in the mecha game it's funny, but other than that it's trash such a waste
this is refreshing since that author just wiped out humanity and the mc might be yeeted in another universe, no baggage of humanity intricate situations I'm tired of it. I'll just let it cook for a while there's only a few chapters