A young boy mysteriously acquires a favor system. Guided by the system, he begins to showcase his abilities in the cosmic world, shining gloriously among the stars
Horrible fucking writing lmfaooo. Author keeps messing up MC's realm in literally every single chapter. I don't even know how many times he has broken through the same realm. He declares MC's realm in one chapter, forgets about it and then MC breaks through the same realm in the next chapter. How tf does that work lmaoo. Also everything about the story is copy from other similar 10000 return novels. Nothing original. Author should give up on writing novels and go do some other shit.
This could’ve been a great novel if the author hadn’t dragged it out so much. We were constantly told about the grandeur of the immortal world, but it was never actually shown. The entire 2200+ chapters are spent in the mortal realm. The MC’s cultivation progressed painfully slow until around chapter 2000, and then everything got crammed into the last 200 or so chapters, making the story feel rushed and chaotic. I really enjoyed the early part when the MC stayed hidden in seclusion and only acted when absolutely necessary, but that changed quickly after he left his domain. He became way too high-profile, a stark contrast to how he was before and suddenly everyone wanted to kill him. Personally, I prefer stories where the MC remains in seclusion most of the time. By the end, both the MC and the system felt nerfed. It ends on an open note, with the MC heading to the next world—but unfortunately, we’ll probably never get to read that part. The author could’ve easily covered both the mortal and higher worlds within 2k chapters, but instead, dragged everything out and wasted the potential.
That said, it still wasn't a bad read overall—decent enough to pass time. Wanted to give it 2.5 stars but since that isn't possible, gave it a 3.
Decent novel but got boring towards the end. Revenge moments were never satisfying because enemies always died in one shot without even having the chance to register what happened. Ending was rushed af probably because author ran out of ideas.
Started off good but kinda fell off by the end. Story is decent. MC practiced both immortal cultivation and martial arts, but halfway through the novel martial arts become irrelevant and we don't hear about it anymore. We hear a lot about upper realm but was never explored before the novel finished. Still overall a decent novel. I'm looking forward to author's other novels.
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2.4 (7 reviews)A young boy mysteriously acquires a favor system. Guided by the system, he begins to showcase his abilities in the cosmic world, shining gloriously among the stars