too much yapping

Soul land 2 + Hoyoverse + City building genre? This is genuinely a breath of fresh air compared to other fanfic of this story. The Writer knew what kind of element to mix together to make the story unique and keep the reader excited.

currently read about 50% of the work. Feel like it started to get weird when MC started acting as Amon. Not sure if it would be shit as the other guy said Ok the story really get way too convoluted as it progress further. It really hard to keep track of all complex stuff the mc is pulling out of his ass.

This is just so bad. Like, the MC is a girl? then what? nothing. literally nothing else. just a slow and boring lotm fic from another perspecitve. following literally the same development and no new exploit. this time with the MC as The Fool's bitch idot servant instead of The Fool himself. Like, why would I want to read that? This is so much worse than reading the orginal work! There's literally nothing redeeming about this work that would outweigh your time reading it. Like, the new mc is still an idiot, weak, no meta knowledge. and no. 7 strongest templar? more like seventh most useless! no new cheat at all. holy hell even reading about klein moretti in original work is more exciting than this! 2 stars for the gut to write this novel for 1300 chapters. congratulation for making money out of this work ig. Nah I changed my mind 1 star for you.

meh, just not what I, the reader want. to read. Work got so little gimmick it's could just be another lotm rewrite. this one make me bored that it feel tormenting just to slowly read until the fun scene come rather than exciting

Wow, just Wow Incredible Story is super well written and the power speculation about various pathway is just very creative and inspiring. I know this is one of the more recent lotm fic that released along with COI but it's definitely much better than other black emperor/justiciar based fanfic Also, as usual for lotm mtl. Try not to use ai translation, it always get the name wrong more than right even if the flow is better. PS. Around chapter 500 onward. Many chapter appear broken/incomplete. Seem to be the problem with RAW site so i guess it can't be fixed and you can only translate from the app.

Is this thing supposed to be a LoTM fic or something? The story is so out of place that I don't know what the writer is trying to do, and honesly im not gonna commit to reading an MTL of something so uncertain. the fact that you can't reliably see the chapter name also make it worse.