They are 6 year old kids use common sense please

Makes no sense you were there for 38 years you could have made Yu Xiaogamg not meet Bibi Dong

It is ok. Problem is Errors and no continuity in Cultivation levels of people no sense. If you make a character reincarnation character who went to past. No matter How talented mc she can be shocked that of and not Stupid . If there is love in start makes no sense. Even Mc questions whats wrong with her. If you wanted her to op and very talented you can keep her entries , you make her have a teacher, a ghost/ spirited of deceased immortal emperor

I don't like it i can't read anymore

One word Mess

Just blabaring

Content was okay but why why are treating bibi dong like shit i saw this very often in these kind of fanfiction and authors screw is lose and what's wrong with you people giving a 5 stars for shit torturing a poor victom

Some of it was ok, when comtinuong to read it becomes a mess unable to continue dropped it. Why are you hating Bibi Dong for no reason Bibi Dong may be wrong for falling in love in with Yu Xiaogang and trying to leave Spirit Hall. But no matter what you say Qian Xuanji is wrong and he should be killed. Instead of doing shit and hating her for no reason. She is poor women you can try to help her. Now is venting his hatred on on Bibi Dong. How is is different it is stupid and Hypocracy. Bibi Dong should apologize to Qian Renxue. But why should see kneel in front of whole Spirit Hall. If should Qian Doulu should kneel infront of Bibi Dong for his actions. If Bibi Dong should kneel apologize, it should be only to Qian Renxue. She only wronged Qian Renxue and she should to Qian Renxue for not killing Qian Xuanji(he should be killed 1000%) but taking her anger Qian Renxue. Bibi Dong always loved Qian Renxue it her hatred that blinded and maked it unable for her to express it. Don't how Bibi Dong died on original.

Its okay mc is being being stupid and do not know what he is doing