I was kinda hoping for MC to destroy or at least disbanded seven treasure school and what with this abandoning to die behaviour? They could do it openly it's not a shameful why kill those poor souls? Also i hate chattering system and i kinda don't understand this power system of new system and fanfic element. I also don't feel any growth or breakthrough in mc's Personality and relationship...lack of character development and interaction. This is not even a time MC has invincible person by her side but still live like a rat to face slap everyone from seven treasure to spirit hall to tang hao.
It's quite a good novel not as bad as other says especially the system it's one of my favourite. I would have given 3 star, but there are so many 1 star so i gave 4. But most bad things about this novel and main reason for me to not give it 5 stars is rushed end which let many things unresolved like relationships, undeveloped power etc. if novel go slowly without rush end this could be one of my favourite fanfic,
1. Can't something else blue silver emperor and cleak sky hammer? Seriously? Although it is good but not favourite. And he didn't even show them to public and even use was very less entire novel.
2. Why no one noticed his abnormal behaviour and powers.
3. Best thing in this novel MC having dragon god bloodline, creating self created spirit ring method, not mascaring spirit beast in name of training etc.
4. Also why didn't MC got asura power from asura god similar to ife and destruction power from God of life and destruction.
5. He was too favorable to shrek....it's not s problem just slightly uncomfortable as no one good or bad in this world everything is driven by intrest. But i kinda disliked how it swjite wash skrek whole other sects like body sect didn't. Honestly i kinda liked body sect, i feel their situation in this fanfic is quite similar to spirit in original novel.
6. For some it might be frustrating harem but it's not that abdominal but slightly frustrating and confusiing. Pity there is no Zhang lengxue as she is favourite fanfic character...why not add her too. Also why show their dog food to us if her partner is not MC? And i feel author make evenone fall for him but didn't fullfil them like author drop the idea half way. Like ju zi, xu jiujiu, meng hongchen, Ning tian, ye guyi etc well most likely reason is rushed end.
7. Many heroine never seen after introducing once. Rushed story.
9. Why did you revive bibi dong? Just to kill her? How much you hate her? If you want a villain ye shisui and long xiaoyao are still there but in this fanfic they never shown.
Few points. Don't why so many stars
1. It's quite realistic to break off the engagement while you are good for nothing especially in fantasy world even in real world if you don't have money you might not get married. But they shouldn't insult him.
2. Also he started to show off in sects after his spirit evolution.....what was author thinking? And they didn't kill him? Despite seeing his talent? Why would tang hao let him go?
3. What's with mascaring spirit beast for training.....i mean seriously?
4. Also how can star lao empire far superior to seven glazed treasure school? How Ning rongrong can seriously beaten and injured but nothing happen especially with a wasted primce like him... i don't side with Ning rongrong but at least make you opponent worthy not cannon fodder....
5. Feels like author forced to write think without effort just lazy writing.
Few things or points....a wasted potential...system ruins it.
1. It might be good but in don't like chattring treasure inside MC, especially if it is not women it gives me gay feeling. Speaking of which why he didn't get any cultivation method or technique from it, wasn't his spirt was from primodial cultivation era?
2. Why did he hunt spirit beast by himself, can't he wait, why do unnecessary work? His explanation was full of loop holes, you you really think spirit hall is rightous organisation (no one is).
3. His spirit can't deserve that grand name. Is he a twin Marital soul ? But inhavent seen it! If not then what is in synopsis.
4. Feels like system slave, can't even think or make dicison without it. And what type of system is this can't even give special spirit rings while it can give power spirit? He still need to kill beast for Power like a brute demonic cultivator? For human supermacy ?Truly useless.
5. His treasure all living beings equal kasaya makes him invincible? What's it's limit?why not use it as innate domain?
6. Becoming hero, was nesseresry? He got himself in trouble and plot Armor saved him, can't tang hao found out about you in so many days? Truely rediculous.
7. I can't understand this heartbeat, red face and leg weak behaviour no matter how beautiful the women one should not go through this situation even for virgins who haven't seen a women.... truly a cringe take. Also it boring cringe watery words. Also ...how he interact zhu zhuqing feel like a simp.
8.In competition you can't use weapon outside of body, so why can you use your weapon, vajra?
9. 29 level at 12 i can understand author nerf him to match with tang san but was it really nesseresry?
It's quite a good novel. I personally like the spirit tool of artificial spirit rings. Quite a good diary novel...but pity it hasn't seen since 90 chaoters
He is f*king pushover and too naive teaching everyone his technique making himself venerable in don't understand this behaviour. Kinda feel outrageous, it is Chinese version of power rangers, be aware, it's f*cking cringe to extreme.....his behaviour also kinda passionate young man type which i am not fan of...this author lover of black eyes black hair...also his bloodlines awaken but his initial talent is not much better than original tang wulin
"No matter what happened, he would stand firmly in front of her, using his body to shield her from wind and rain, and doing everything he could to protect her!
So, how could he break the promise with his own sister???
Moreover, he hadn't even finished telling Na'er the story of the Dragon Maid, which was full of fantasy and warmth!!!
So, how could he allow Na'er to be taken away so cruelly??"
Seriously! Isn't this pretending too much...wind and rain??
"But why does he have music and lyrics when he summons this armor?”
“Courage burns like a flame in my heart, the shield of guardianship is connected by will!”
“Facing despair with unyielding resolve, I lead the way for miracles to reappear!”
...loke even character themselves are cringed by it.
It's still quite ok except large killing of spirit beats (dozens of 100k and hundreds of 10k year soul beast are killed by him in one go) and i kinda dislike his way to gather faith.