CONFUSION? sometimes an event is repeated(ex;space ring equip on chapter 54, space ring equip chap 56)(i dont know the exact chap, but i feel this novel has some mix AI-chatgpt on it) (even the cliffhanger has some AI traces)(of course, just a spectaculation, bcause of dejavu feeling)

the mc is kinda dense, explanation/narration in a round-about manner,i somehow read until 600+ chapters because of magic engineering the plot kinda making me have an headache the child of mc die the mc is so slow in development