Bad review for ch 673. If you want to write then write. If not don't mention it. No one says novel need to be very realistic.
Other are OK. Still reading along.
Toooo much repeated explanation on simple plot from multiple angle.
So the flow is disrupted. 😂😂 I think he is going for word count and feel that author might himself be troubled and recking his brains out to say the same thing multiple times.
Just at ch 4 there is poison. Why add it there. And what's mc's expression after it happened. Irrelevant bullshit.
Edit. After reading along.. The mc's nature is disrupting the emersion. Sometimes smart, sometimes stupid, brave, cowardly, horny and boring.
Overall it was great. There were some places where I think it was overdone and could result in severe consequences but he managed to downside it. It was a great read. Thanks.