Absolutely good although cheat information insufficient in early chapter...but if you read more chapter...than you find it's really good fanfic... And tang san is really a trash character,,,, although fanfic say a bit much but they have reason.

I am disappointed too much... first if it's some system or transmigration cheat than its fine,,,but fanfic say it's original universe cheat or talent secret skill.... Do you think supreme rule in swallowed star drink alcohol so he doesn't interfere.. 😂😂 swallowed star not like perfect world where anyone can go past but they can time reverse to see everything what happened in past ...but how you go future.....and in this fanfic biggest fuc*king trash event when chaos city leader ask him do want accept me as your teacher,,,and mc say willing willing like trash... fanfic if it's not with cheat how can reader like it and if you have cheat why accept teacher...do you need guidance than didn't you know (mc) or read swallowed star novel before transmigration ... you know everything how to breakthrough to at least chaos master level which is one level higher than eternal true God realm ...so why bastard author do things like those polt where mc became chaos city leader disciple,,,, it's too much annoying,,,,I really want to smash author head....

Trash writing,,,,mc like even if you give him great emperor cultivation level,,,, still think ye fan is better,,I am just emperor nothing special... bastard author,,and bastard mc.... with phoenix and kung peng immortal king level technic he like I can't reach higher level,,,,f uck man sometimes I really wanted to smash the bastard author and mc with a giant stone...

Mc is op but Ben 10 and other characters showing weak,,,, even alien x destroy universe or create universe with a thought,,, so it's maybe multiverse level or omniverse level,,,, why look like weak chicken in this fanfic,,,,let me remind you author,,you and other author like if they write with Ben 10 than others hero like weak chicken,,, same for this fanfic where mc like powerful than everyone with minor abilities,,, where other member also like,,,,oh my god you are so powerful... 😂

I don't understand anything,,,writing quality is very low,,,,hope other friend able to understand and enjoy..

Mc thinking is like poor trash,,,, with hongmeng skill he was like sometime think I don't reach universe lord level sometime think I can surpass everyone with hongmeng skill,, sometimes thinks a I abel surpass lou feng sometimes lou feng life level high where he said hongmeng skill can even upgrade his life level million level,,,, where lou feng reach only 100k level now you say give this fanfic one star is wrong or not,,,I think author don't even able to remember what he write in previous chapter,!

It's good fanfic but I don't understand why create a plot that I have to became someone else disciple,,, with mc cheat and knowing original story swallowed star why need someone guidance in cultivation I don't understand in this fanfic chaos city leader doesn't help much if you think carefully,,,, only resource ,,,lou feng need guidance because he doesn't know how became strong faster but mc know how to breakthrough to chaos master level which is higher than eternal tru god level,...so why???

Too much Disappointed

Yes, brother I like this fanfic why became someone disciple ,,,,when mc really don't need master like universe master level power ,,,, because after accepting master like chaos city leader some times latter( maybe 5 or 6 chapter )mc became universe master what the fu...ck my question than why accept or became disciple when I have cheat like beyond god king level......and mc really doesn't need any guidance,,,, because system is better....

Swallowed star fanfic a major problem in universe master accept disciple.....mc have op cheat why accept other master....now if you chose Lou feng problem chaos city leader guide him creating skill or ECT but fanfic mc doesn't need any thing that require him accept master or something...lolll like marvel fanfiction ancient one like omnipotent behavior where she need time stone to see future and time stone like big boss other infinite stone like trash,,,,fuc kkkk man I am disgusted that much with this type fu cking author writing........