Reincarnated as the Primarch of the lost Eleventh Legion, the protagonist finds himself facing an erased destiny.
Chosen by the source realm known as the Kingdom of Disorder, Ning Lu’s fate is rewritten from the very moment he awakens in the gene-lab gestation pod. With the power of mysticism and alchemy, he delivers a startling blow to the four Chaos Gods.
During the Great Crusade, he expands the frontiers of the Imperium. In the Horus Heresy, he personally executes traitor Primarchs.
After the Emperor is bound to the Golden Throne, he becomes the last active Primarch—constantly rushing between war zones to extinguish fires across the galaxy.
In the War of the Beast, he slays the Beast itself.
During the Long War, he strikes terror into the hearts of traitors and heretics.
All praise his unwavering loyalty. But… is that the whole truth?
“I'm just taking advantage of the situation. What? You didn’t notice?
With the right alchemical ingredients, I can cultivate Beyonders.
Belisarius Cawl? He’s just my ‘mentor’…”
“I am the shadow of Order, exploiting every loophole hidden within the rules.”
He is The Black Emperor—a being who rewrites the laws of reality, forges a new Imperium, and opens a future of hope amid the darkness for all of humanity.
[Keywords: Warhammer + Primarch OC + Original Legion + Lord of the Mysteries + Potion Pathways / Sequences]
The first 15 chapters of the novel are written flawlessly. Perhaps the author has reworked an existing text or the editors have tried. However, then the pace of narration slowed down, and the plot began to develop too slowly. Inappropriate jokes based on coincidences have appeared.
This is a rather strange decision, or it was like that initially, and then the author started editing the text and improving the style. The first edited chapters are a decent novel. But then it becomes obvious that this is an above-average novel at best, in which the artificial stretching of the text and the illogical actions of the characters are noticeable.
On the one hand, it's good that this isn't another Chinese post-apocalypse with a harem and powerful cheat. On the other hand, the dynamics suffer greatly due to the stretching of the text and inappropriate humor.
I'm giving it 5 stars so far, but we'll see what happens next.
#edit#
Almost a hundred chapters have been read in the hope of improvement. But there is no improvement, the author started writing about a group of characters, you read 5-10 chapters, but only one day has passed in the plot. The plot seems to be frozen in time, it would seem that the end of the world has come, there are monsters outside, but there is no rush, which should be in such a situation. The characters don't try to do anything, but just live a normal life, taking their time. The author tries to captivate the reader by hinting at a change of scenery by sending the main character to another place. But right after that, he starts writing about how the men who survived are trying to fuck women, how someone cheated on someone, how someone stole something, and so on ad infinitum.
All these hundred chapters can be safely, without loss of context and meaning, fit into 30 chapters, but the author pulls and pulls! The desire to continue reading abruptly disappeared, with such a presentation and with so many chapters, the MC will move from a dead end in 120-150 chapters at best.
2 stars!
I can't say that this novel is terrible, but the author is clearly a schoolboy.
Logic died at the very beginning, when the author drew a concept where people, due to demographic and material problems, somehow found a way to teleport to another reality and after 6 months of being there, they can come into contact with Earth and send materials.
According to the novel's lore, every 3 years 30 million people aged 18-21 can go there. It's been a long time, people have started to adapt to such changes, even opened educational institutions that teach how to survive in another world. And the main character is an excellent student who graduated with 1st place in the exams! But he refused to sponsor and work for others, because he has a cheat.
And the author forgets all of the above right away, because the main character doesn't even know how to use a fishing net, what the hell did they teach you there?
These are basic things, humanity has contact with survivors who survived the first 6 months, and they know what's going on in another world. But absolutely all newbies don't even know the basic things for survival and make a fuss in the chat when the MC sold two fish.
I don't see any obvious racism yet, but to be honest, when there is an alternative, it's a bit boring to read on. I'll temporarily postpone it, I'll come back sometime later, let's see what the author wrote in 1000+ chapters.
To be honest, I'm disappointed, everything in the novel follows a template, but the main character is an idiot and a naive teenager.
The author, in turn, repeatedly tries to show him as an intelligent and cunning person, but it turns out to be a cringe. Because of this, the author simply lowered the intelligence of all the characters except the main character, which is simply unbearable to read.
The enemies who wanted to cheat the MC, but were caught, first ask for forgiveness, and at that moment the author sharply reduces their intelligence, and they, being held hostage by the main character, begin to make demands and so on. What was that? Is this really written by a human?
There is no logic in the novel, the system with a set of troops is written for show, the parameters and rules can change at any time to suit the plot.
Although there is no plot as such, the book is generally below average.
A genre created by brainwashed Chinese. The plot, the concept, the theme — all this does not matter, because the main thing is to emphasize how China suffers from attacks from all over the world, but does not give up. And when the main character appears, everything starts to get better!
This genre has no value, it's a waste of time. No matter how hard the authors try, mighty China remains unchanged, everyone is trying to rob and destroy it. Another fatal mistake and irritant is online chat! Almost half of the chapter, and sometimes more, is occupied by meaningless and stupid comments from the audience. I honestly don't understand, don't the Chinese really have any friends? Why do they prefer online chat rooms in a fucking novel, rather than regular communication with people?
The author also stole "Warhammer" and wove it into his novel. After all, China is powerful and strong, it has a 5,000-year history, didn't you find your own Sci-fi for this? Lol!
It's all complete nonsense.
The novel is average, nothing outstanding. It's not bad for its genre, but the author clearly doesn't understand the technical details, especially when it comes to a Mobile Home. Because of this, the narrative turned out to be rather superficial, with an emphasis on drama. Up to 80-90 chapters, the author really tried, coming up with interesting plot twists and working out the characters. But then self—replays began, and the main drawback of the novel is the indestructible enemy. "A Biao" with a plot armor, and it's starting to get annoying. It seems that the author's inspiration ran out after the 50th chapter, and he began to write "whatever". After 100-200 chapters, the novel becomes very boring and monotonous.
Among the positive aspects, it can be noted that the author is not a teenager who writes exclusively about suffering and bullying others. The plot is not about revenge and the pleasure of bullying different people. Although this is present in abundance, the author has not made his main character a degenerate or a pervert. While people are suffering, he just sits in the car and plays games. You'll understand me if you've come across novels with the end of the world and endless supplies.
The novel completely copies another novel, where the MC is forced to donate his income. But even with the original reference material, the author managed to write worse!
MC is a bipolar idiot, sometimes he doesn't react to swearing, sometimes he goes crazy, sometimes he keeps silent about bullying himself, then he suddenly starts cursing for simple sarcastic jokes about him.
I did not understand what the author meant by this. So, the main character here is an actor and a director, the choice of the author in the films was very boring. Oh yes, he's also a singer, but the choice of songs is also completely inappropriate. According to the plot, this is the current time with tiktok and other things, but the author drops a track from 2006, which has become insanely outdated over the years, and writes that this track is a masterpiece!
At some point, the author decided to lick China's ass and became an aggressive racist. Attacking everything foreign, from food and drinks to songs, movies and actors. The apotheosis of this cringe was when he invited Hong Kong actor Tony Liu to play in Infernal Affairs and changed his name to some kind of Hua Tsai!
My God, the level of hypocrisy and point-licking is off the charts. He changed the name of the Hong Kong film legend just because his name is "Tony"!
The plot is very boring, after the first dozen chapters the logic is lame, the main character is an idiot who does stupid and inappropriate things, then the author tries to smooth it out through the mouths of other characters, like "well, this is a young man, his blood is hot, and that's good". Complete nonsense in terms of working on the main character, due to the fact that the author was busy licking China's ass after the beginning of the novel, the main character turned into a hysterical moron who also wanted to become a patriot, but behaves like a complete racist.
A novel from a brainwashed Chinese man for fellow Chinese.
If we look at it as a whole, then this novel is average or slightly above average.
On the one hand, the author writes about the classic main character who helps everyone, where his story armor protects him. But in order not to lose his readers, because such main characters are no longer in high esteem, the author tried to add a touch of coolness and cunning to the main character, but, unfortunately, he could not correctly introduce this into the novel.
Because of this, the dynamics in the novel are constantly jumping, then he says mc doesn't have a cheat, then it turns out he does, then it turns out the cheat is useless, then it's not completely useless, and so on and on. Like any brainwashed Chinese, he goes to cooperate with the government, but the author apparently did not want mc to openly lick China's ass and turn the whole thing into a farce with hyperactive officials at the helm of the whole country. He sent us some nonsense shit and didn't write anything.
China officials: What should we do???? We will give him tons of supplies, because we are Chinese, we are good and we respond to everyone with kindness!
And so on, the ass-licking plot and getting some benefits from the government is understandable, but the execution is very naive. As a result, everything turned into childish nonsense, where politicians behave like teenagers.
Another main problem of the novel, besides the quality of the text, is the dynamics and pace, the novel is incredibly boring for its genre. It is simply impossible to read in some places, the author writes entire chapters about some nonsense that does not appear in the plot in any way.
One of the worst short stories in its genre with a vile protagonist, whom the author tries in every possible way to show as smart, cunning, but it doesn't work out.
As I understand it, this is a fanfiction on some Chinese TV series, because of this, the main character knows who is who and what riches they have, and so on. The main character has a cheat in the form of a warehouse full of supplies, using this, he is engaged in theft and steals various things, from furniture to gold and jewelry, and leaves them in the warehouse space with the words "after the 2000s I will sell them and become a millionaire."
In the story, he starts working by paying bribes, then marries the most beautiful and busty girl working there, after which the author decided to add a harem! And the main character has 4-5 girls, in general, the harem completely spoils the romance, destroying logic when women go to sleep with him just to get pregnant?
The main character is such a nasty type that all he does is go to work and get lazy there, then he goes to fuck his mistresses, then he drinks with friends, then he goes to steal or sell stolen goods on the black market, goes home, fucks his wife and sleeps.
And the author seriously writes that the main character's figure is too good, with huge muscles, that the girls/women next door are drooling at him! I read more than 1000 chapters on another site, and the author wrote only once that MC decided to do push-ups one morning. Only 1 time per thousand chapters!
When you write in detail about MC's daily life, where does he get his muscles and abs when all he does is eat, drink, smoke and fuck women?
I do not know why everyone gives 5 stars here, but this is one of the most boring novels I have read.
Maybe it's because of the number of words, but the author writes one thing and chews it for another half a chapter, and so on in each chapter. The author stretches this topic to half a chapter with his explanations of the most insignificant and even obvious things. The plot is mediocre, the main character is mediocre, the cheat is weak, and Chinese CENSORSHIP, as always, is powerful.
Among the tons of the same novels, it does not stand out in any way and clearly does not deserve 5 stars.
Everything started well, but after a few hundred chapters, the main character licks the ass of politicians.
In terms of romance, it's also a problem, he simply can't decide who to be with, while the author forcibly smacks of other female characters, this is one of those cases when you're just walking down the road, suddenly some girl rushes at you and won't let go, no matter what you do. The logic of fucking anime, why is it here, I don't understand, when the main character becomes a big shot in terms of business, the author tries to add a new woman and again in a circle, if a woman appears in the novel and she is given more than half a chapter, it means she is here for a long time !
The main character behaves like an idiot, resents his wife (from the future) because of her family, knowing what kind of people they are, while the wife has nothing to do with family affairs and is innocent. But the author decided it was a great move to bring the relationship closer to the second girl!
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4.7 (15 reviews)Reincarnated as the Primarch of the lost Eleventh Legion, the protagonist finds himself facing an erased destiny.
Chosen by the source realm known as the Kingdom of Disorder, Ning Lu’s fate is rewritten from the very moment he awakens in the gene-lab gestation pod. With the power of mysticism and alchemy, he delivers a startling blow to the four Chaos Gods.
During the Great Crusade, he expands the frontiers of the Imperium. In the Horus Heresy, he personally executes traitor Primarchs.
After the Emperor is bound to the Golden Throne, he becomes the last active Primarch—constantly rushing between war zones to extinguish fires across the galaxy.
In the War of the Beast, he slays the Beast itself.
During the Long War, he strikes terror into the hearts of traitors and heretics.
All praise his unwavering loyalty. But… is that the whole truth?
“I'm just taking advantage of the situation. What? You didn’t notice?
With the right alchemical ingredients, I can cultivate Beyonders.
Belisarius Cawl? He’s just my ‘mentor’…”
“I am the shadow of Order, exploiting every loophole hidden within the rules.”
He is The Black Emperor—a being who rewrites the laws of reality, forges a new Imperium, and opens a future of hope amid the darkness for all of humanity.
[Keywords: Warhammer + Primarch OC + Original Legion + Lord of the Mysteries + Potion Pathways / Sequences]