Nonsensically story development, his sister was sick so he left her alone without explaing anything to her.very arrogant for someone that weak , i mean he is at bottom of realm list yet act as if he is king of the world . he want to take care of his sister but forgets about her for week ,no food, water or medicine while he keep practicing for 3 days and than he leaves her alone with nothing to fight outside city. when everything fails system suddenly makes him powerful for no reason . idiotic writhing.

this would have been good novel where mc works hard and gains reward for it except author ruined it. he went from no body to RM main player in less than a year,he do not have left any way up to go from there . he went from not knowing how to pass the ball to better than zidane in less than half year,so after that there was no point in reading it . story has no sense of prorogation . everything happens at fast pace with no time passing in between . we do not know how long has pass just that next match . it could have been amazing story but author wasted it for fast-pace junk.

he build entire team for less than 20 mil 15 of which was from his players that sold so investment was less than 2 mil , won four championship, even after such thing club was sold to an businessman . how do this make senses that they sold the winning club for chunk change .. i lost interest when he left the club , i mean he was wealthy from stock market he had like 30 mil on his name , he could have bought the share of team but not he went to other team to work to other to make money of him. just his first team at end sold players about 50 mil or more with total value of his team of more than 100 mil and he left that. he could have invested in team when he won gambling in Europe cup , he know value of all players , he could have own entire team by the end of his league.

This was good in first arc when he was more of lore king and team player. in France he played offense defense midfield fullback ,everything . he was new player every game , that was exciting . every cheat play would give him some different performance. but after he went to Germany he become one trick pony . his cheat become a afterthought. it was not exciting anymore. in his first team every player has arc even ball boy had arc. they were his team .he had a teacher, friends rivals .it was felt whole . in his second team he rarely interact with anyone aside from a mid-fielder . whole thing look more like one man show . it became non magical novel.

MC has special body that is very useful to powerful people , he know to be safe he has to keep low profile but 2 month in sect and he is already famous. everyone know he has special body . elders that know about this do not stop it even knowing this would bring powerful enemies to sect. stupid and arrocunt mc.

Confusing Mess . very good cheat but story is very confusing, power level is confusing . skills used are confusing, plot is confusing .