Man, was the premise and overarching plot of the story was sooooo good. The problem starts with the MC however. He feels like a dog being led around by people. I can understand that he's being courteous to Nine Glazed sect, but man does it feel bad that he's being led around like a dog with a leash. It was hard for him as well considering his family became a loyalist of the sect. Clearly at the start it was a transaction between both sides. Later on, he became too self righteous as well in the later stages. He became tang san in the way tang san is portrayed in most fiction, self righteous moron and a diehard loyalist of a sect.

The MC doesn't really feel like a villain I guess? He feels more like a supporting actor having a system that helps him gain strength and he is transitioning to the usual "mc" route. The story was subpar at best, its just a repetitive an antagonist appear, steal luck, rinse and repeat. This story isn't the villain story usually people look for.

Pity, I thought it will be a decent story, became a sex fest at the first world travel. Disappointing

Too much of an info dump. I dont know if the succeeding chapters will change however theres too much self analyzing and talking, with some chapters repeating past infos already written. And the way the mc is being written feels like he's a smartass rather than a cunning person. Most of the antagonist are killed by "evil is punished good is rewarded" that the mc kept on reiterating.

Its too long winded, imagine being 140 ch in and they are still in notting city. Appearance of zhuqing in early stage doesn't make sense as well. Its just dropping and introducing whatever for some plot and excitement

The chat group wasn't that necessary, or if it was, it could have been introduced aroun 200-300 chapters in. The story about the main world, DD, wasn't even fleshed out and were already jumping with world traveling. The resurrection coin was a complete mess as well, it was out of the blue and unnecessary.