- 1 star for the plot about Karuizawa Kei, It really torturous, not only did she has to experience the original plot, but the mc also torture her to reveal her secret. Author also write that she has already reveal her secret to Hirata whom sell her out to the mc later, and write about how much she feel betrayed about it. Why can't the author just make her suffer less, maybe the bully stop before she get stabbed, like most fan-fic. Why does she has to suffer even more than the original? And after writing 90 chapter, the author start to stop laying any foundation for change, it start to feel like the event will be exactly the same as the original with minimal change and full of water. For example, despite all the change happen in the early stage, during later competition, character are still force by the author to do the same thing they did in the original, like Kushida still betray the class info etc.

The novel specifically mention Yukino to be one of the heroine, but Author decided to make the entire cast of Oregairu a braindead villain. Honestly I don't get why the author did that. First kill of Yuigahama dog(and blame Hikigaya for not being the one hit by the car instead of her dog), then make Shizuka Hiratsuka working in adult film just to discredit them as villains. As for the COTE plot, it really bother me a lot that Hikigaya keep getting blackmail. His class D teacher blackmail him with expulsion to make him show all his card, the dragon guy blackmail him into ending up paying him point to allow him to keep in contact with Shiina. and then make Shiina accidentally tell everyone in class D about it. The Pattern I start to see is the trope of "MC acting helpless while other help him show off" MC will always end up being the center of attention by all mean even if it disadvantages to himself. The only good point is that the MC have very good relationship with the heroines, very heart warming interaction, but that it.

Other than the beginning, the mc did hide himself quite well, and he is quite smart about what to write in the dairy.

This Author is disgusting, and so is the MC. the first point is, rather than Picking talanted person as a wife, author decided to go the mass production route where they have the mc accepting 60+ wife even before the first child is born. Second point is author make a force plot where the mc need to accept a widow, and the MC do so willingly and blindly just for benefit. Then, they design a plot to have the widow husband come back, but to be righteous, they villainize the husband. At this point the MC disgustingness started to show. He lie and deceive the widow, but when the widow didn't believe him, and try to undermine him because she knew that he lie to her. he get mad, like he is the victim. overall although the story has a good start, it is ruined by the MC character, and what the author decided to write. Not to mention, after building a harem, author decide to invite male doctor/alchemist into the house, when author can just make them female. And let the doctor help with giving birth and health check, which even see his own wife body. It feel like the author is trying to make the most disgusting plot for this genre.

I really hate how the mc keep thinking of using female characters as hooter employee. Author keep making the mc forcing female characters to wear revealing cloths to attract customer, and even write about those male customer fantasy about the female characters. During konosuba arc, at least the story is completely original, but once mc go to tensura world, it become watery with so many description about character.

Most of the plot is nice, mc did reveal himself in the group, way too off guard, but Author didn't intent to make chat group member enemy with each other, so it not that bad. The bad part is when author start to spread the red ideology, make Japan and USA an original villain outside anime plot. It become unbearable every time the author mention these. I like the vibe between chat group member, but the plain propaganda really ruin the story.

It start out great, but it went downhill right after the mc get Warhammer cheat. summoning Primarch, and author make them think that the mc is the god emperor, but the interaction is full of contradiction and awkwardness. The mc literally playing with his maid right in front of them and make some of his maid serve them on the beach and he previously use to have a party with those maid/android girl. MC act more like a Slaanesh demon instead of the god emperor, and those Primarch who is self conscious just roll with it. Later on, he basically let the Primarch be the one interact with other character including other heroine from other world. Author sometime give hint that these female character might be included in the harem, but also do lucky pervert plot of those heroine with the primarch like being seen naked and such. This is just the worse, You can either only write about the war and management aspect with no romance, or focus on the romance and harem aspect for the story. This in between is just the worse, It feel like the author do so intentionally to screen out people who like the NTR feeling.