This novel is very conveluded, The mc tries to do too many things and it makes ghe story confusing. The author also makes shit up as he goes, giving the Mc powers when convenient to direct. The worst thing though is the romance, its done so baldy and is a big chunk of the novel that it ruins everything. A harem is already difficult to make believable in a fantasy setting, in the real world its downright impossible, and certainly not a harem of confident top females. Its just so unnecessary and drags the whole novel to a cesspit.

The premise is interesting, but the execution is not believeable. From how much leniency the world government gives the Mc to how doflamingo doesnt wipe out the Mc for kidnapping baby5 just because he makes a deal with him. These are all things that wouldnt happen, the thing that makes it bad is that it happens way too much. The author warps the personalities of these characters just that it works in MC's favor. It just takes you out of the story .

it was going so well, until the author decides to bring in Toneri BEFORE the village is even officially founded, like wtf. I get that the MC and the village dont really have any real obstical anymore, but thats the whole point of a fanfic, to change the past . No amount of butterfly effect Bs would make this good writing. a 2 just for pissing me off

A great MC with an OP cheat. It does take away the tension but its just so hype that i dont care. The author is great at describing the atmosphere. Bonus points: no nonsense about chinese national team, he just plays for the Belgian team

This would've been a lot better if it didn't keep messing up the timeline. The uzumaki's fall, death of nawaki, the 2nd and the 3rd ninja. These are all in the wrong order. Also he gets away with a lot of suspicious behavior which would normally get any ninja killed by Danzo.

Lots of racism, no more.

Its not bad, just more of the same. Jf you've read a couple one piece fanfic, this wont be anything new.

I honestly don't get the high rating. It's a simple internet reaction novel, just like one of the thousands urban novel but now in one piece.

Its alright but maybe a little cringe with lines like "You suffer from long term arrogance, recommend treatment plan: being beaten.". It's also a bit repetitive since the whole shtick is being a doctor

Its different than what i expected, it doesn't follow the usual flow of simulation novels, simulating a 1000 times and dying in everyone of them. Its more of a one time simulation with a daily simulation cheat inside, a bit confusing i know. It's not bad, but not my taste either.