This a fine story but it it doesn't quite suit my taste. My biggest fault with this story is the amount of Lotm info dumps you get spread throughout the story. It may be seen as being diligent but it just breaks the immersion for me. This paired with the weird pacing makes it a not so satisfying read for me.

its oke, i just dont get why the MC didnt immediately go after Kaido and Big mom genes sample after he had defeated them. They also glaze Garp too much, here he's two to three times stronger than Kaido based on how he fought the MC's clones. tldr: weird pacing, weird power scaling

It does a lot right and a lot wrong. The premise and power progession is interesting. The story also has deviates from the original plot for a while which makes it already ahead of many other fanfiction. But it eventually goes back to the cliche tournament of power. Even the original art of the plot are just events from db super but only in a different order. In conclusion its a slight above average DBS fanfiction which means its borderline sh#t

Its a good novel but i recommend reading it in parts. I actually really like the story but i cannot stand it that every thing the MC does is unnecessarily complicated. Stealing something, escaping or anything else the Mc has to make an 100 step plan for nothing. You get tired of keeping up. So read maybe 50chps max at a time to keep it from getting annoying to read.

its a good series but it does fall short and the end. the good: it has a decent progression and the story is exciting most of the times. it explores a lot of 40k and shows what would happen if a new power system was added to the mix. The bad: even though the story moves forward it does feel dragged out especially starting from ch350. A lot of things are planned but take 100s of chapters to execute because some other thing pops up. It's also dialogue heavy with action few and far inbetween. The last thing is that there's a lot of ultraman jargon that many who have not seen the show(like me) find annoying info dump. Many of the cons only become a problem in the latter parts only because the story's pace slows down. In the beginning its an excellent warhammer 40k fanfiction with an OP main character and fun cheat. It only goes to a 4/5 because of the latter part, i would still recommend reading it

Bonus points for not starting on earth and and having a great cheat. Its just a shame is to short

This story is not bad just a bit too slow for me. He is still an apprentice at ch200 and at this rate it will take thousands of chapters. The cheat grants him rewards for learning multiple professions but the rewards are too little for the time spent. There is almost no action or exploration aside from reading books. Its just not for me

i dont understand the high rating, this is a story with no direction. The Mc is talented and gets strong pretty quickly being admiral level by the time he's 18 but he has no direction in his life. *Spoiler* He decides to control the underground on a whim and get it done quick. He randomly is able to become a celestial because Imu finds him 'talented'. its just seems like the story goes all over the place with no goal and there's not even a lot of exploring the one piece world. The story is subpar and the only good thing is how he uses the devil fruit [ 2.6/5 ]

average, the mc gets quick really fast and eventually becomes too OP. He's stronger than champa withtin a couple of months and becomes even stronger. It really doesnt have any tension or plot development. everything is the same as the DB super with only Goten being the one who defeats villains. its oke if you just want a wish fullfillment story

its a fine story to pass time, it just feels underdeveloped. For one the cheat is massively underused and nerfed because he should be getting billions of points every million years which he could use for the enlightment function but he only gets a couple of thousands. He's also the strongest chat member and the others cant actually help aside from one even after 200ch. I mean he might as well not have any cheat at this point. all in all its fine if you just forget about the whole cheat thing, but then its just a worse version of the original