combat is strange, even doesn't make sense.. like mc kill 8 goblin with the help archer girl yet they almost exhausted to death, i can understand mc fatigue, but Archers in historical battles often carried 1-3 sheaves of arrows (24-72 arrows). This suggests they could potentially shoot for 4-12 minutes at a sustained rate before needing more ammunition. There is also something wrong mc using mage hand with 10 lbs force, Omni Calculator says an average person's punch force can be around 150-250 lbf (pounds of force). so basically mage hand is like a slap, but what would happen if you slap the goblin eye or his pp?

it's TRASH. just read those commoner ninja without inheritance and bloodline limit create many new jutsu every so often, but this guy become tobirama aside from the Rasengan and tobirama water release jutsu, he did not create any new jutsu!

"Tang Hao, I want you dead!!!!!!!" A line of bloody tears flowed from Ye Lan's eyes. tang hao kill his parent and this fanfic just ruined by this trash plot... "Uncle Tao, don't be too sad. Have you heard of gods?" "Isn't that just a legend?" Su Yuntao was very surprised that Ye Lan suddenly brought up gods. "This isn't a legend, but it's real. I will become a god in the future and revive both my parents!" Ye Lan said firmly. so what's the point of those 'A line of bloody tears flowed from Ye Lan's eyes'. just when you thought this fanfic can be ruined by trash revenge plot, now we get become god to revive parent...

the eye technique he get from system is BORING! it might get interesting if he created it himself. the real title for this fanfic is Konoha: There is Definitely Something Wrong with This Fanfic That Make It Boring!

His mind was already overwhelmed; after a month of hard work, his eyes were bloodshot and his face was full of exhaustion. He had been working for a long time, so much so that he didn't even have time to attend his graduation photo shoot. remind me of xianxia and wuxia tags 'courthing death!', cough out blood, can't see mount tai, etc..

mc calling uchiha elder idiot, but what mc does is the same with shisui and itachi, that is become uchiha genius and be targeted by konoha F4.. even more idiotic, mc use sword and ask sakumo how to train it (they are already on par for sword realm), sakumo answer at our current level i don't know because a sword path cut off 1000 year ago, then mc out of nowhere thinking about one piece swordman, after that he stop thinking about how to improve it. me : wait, did you just answer it? after all it's just a sword, not haki, nen, reiatsu, etc..