this story sucked me in for a while. it's honestly quite entertaining, but the story is kinda bad. or like, the mc is incompetent af with his system. but the system basically makes him, as they say "unsolvable". INCREDIBLY op at every step to where any problem that pops up is solved with a chop. the plot itself is actually kinda good but watching the mc turtle through it by poorly running his shop is annoying (hell, at the beginning of this story he was practically giving everything away for free, but complaining that he wasn't making money? 🤔) this is trash, but it's enjoyable trash, so. make of that what you will 😅

usually ill look at other reviews and complain that ppl have such negative opinions after only reading so few chapters. now im genuinely dumbfounded it took ppl that long to give this crap a 1 star 😅 one person even got up to 92 chapters of this??? you a brave one 🫡 anyways, this shit is shit. i spit on this with my whole heart.

this is not a fanfiction by any stretch of the imagination. this is a fan rewrite of the original. they took some things they wanted and changed them, but otherwise made the story from a range of "no different" ~ "worse than before" and you'd be sorely disappointed with it before chapter 200. i got to like 180sh after skimming the last 50 chapters and realized they really did copy/paste the original story, and like edit in ..this is that cheap shit we used to do for essays where we just take the cliffnotes and paraphrase the EXACT same contents wondering how we got an F. this is that F.

this is pretty good, but unless there's some pop culture understanding of "yandere" that im missing, i completely do not get the infatuation with the sub genre. it's an annoying woman being even MORE annoying as the story progresses. id like to see more of how mc uses his abilities and maneuvers around konoha, thanks. like, the girl doesn't even make sense when (spoiler:) she kills ino and flees the village, only to come right back in a day or two? 🤔 the chapters in on another "oh no crazy yandere" episode and it kinda makes me lose my taste for this particular novel, but i still rate it a 4 for now. the mc's timing and changes for the hyuga clan had a lot to do with this. he bided his time and waited perfectly to assassinate danzo, changing exactly what he wanted from the og and not making a single splash (other than the akatsuki thing, but those guys were psychopaths anyways)

this gets quite boring after a while. even with the super sick plot twist. the story itself is fine but the village daily bits and characters popping up here and there bore the piss out of me.

so, bit of an issue here: within the first hundred chapters or so, entire sections of chapters are shaved off. i went to the raw site and found that many of the chapters are split into two pages with like a click arrow to the 2nd page. i can only imagine the program that pulls novels is unable to navigate that on it's own. the first few chapters this happens is weird but unimportant, but later on, namely around 6x - 7x chapters, ACTUAL story is missing and i can already guess this is going to be annoying as hell. couple that with the fact that this novel seems really hard to find elsewhere?? the name might not even be accurate. ive seen everything from "extreme gene hero", "ultimate gene valkyrie", and "supreme gene emperor" (only way i knew they were the same was the synopsis was identical) but for one reason or another i was locked out of reading those as well. im gonna leave this with 3 stars because you "have" to leave a rating, but it'd be great if somebody could take a look into fixing or finding a fix for this in the future 🫡

just finished reading this on another site where it has about 4 more chapters, but either way, same thing goes. 100% excellent novel, definitely top tier for its genre. if you like naruto fics, give it a go.