Average

The mc acts like he can't tolerate any one using him and taking advantage of him and even suppress him and he is too afraid of the enemy's background that he always swallows the breath and tells him self that he will become strong and he wouldn't have to care about the weaklings and not only that he will act domineering when dealing with weaklings like a typical villan

Its actually good i mean sure he has a lot of luck and plot armour and always gets things he needs right away but i am in chap 510+ story is good , there is no stupid face slapping and stupid and arrogant young masters , all the human race was mostly united till where I read.

Starting plot is copied from Invincible How many cultuvation system has this guy combine first it martial sprit and then sprit ring that to with years reference Now there is golden elixir

Lines are all messed up