It's good , the protagonist get very strong in later chapters , don't stop reading it because at starting he is depicted weaker and not better than ye fan
It's really good and among top douluo daluo fanfiction that I have , like I have read doluo daluo : body is respected and there is fanfiction sun and moon glory , etc but please don't end it at first part of doluo daluo , I don't know why but there are not fanfics of douluo which are written till douluo dalu 3 from douluo dalu 1 and if there are , they are not good , and I think it would feel great if it's whole douluo dalu series fanfiction from douluo daluo 1 to till ongoing douluo daluo 4 , as I have not readed the original douluo daluo 4 , I don't know the cultivation method of gods in douluo dalu but in douluo fanfiction it really feels off that from just god king position a level 99 titled daluo can be as powerful as godking where as other without god king position can only have power of first level god or third level according to the level of their god position , like it's ok if that position give you the power of God king level but I think it's not a true God king as it's power comes from God position, there should be cultivation of increasing the power of yourself till god King level but fanfiction writer always end it after their mc get god king position, so please continue it and don't end this on douluo part 1 , it's really a good fanfiction, if it just end at part 1 , I feel bad
I really love this fanfiction of douluo dalu , it is very good , the protagonist is very intelligent and not like other protagonist who can't keep it in their pants , I don't oppse harem but I think there should be a limit, you can't take everyone in your harem right, I would favour Qian renxue and zhu zhuqing , I don't have much opinion on Ning rongrong . I think you should not end the story on douluo dalu 1 , you can continue the story, like don't kill tang san right away, and let be a low level god ( lower than protagonist )in god realm , let it continue till douluo dalu 2, 3 , the protagonist son can play a role in them . As for protagonist, I think you should give him some cheat like incredible understanding, and he can goto higher plane like doupo and the great ruler ,