Very good novel...good point of view....people who are good to harry potter does'nt mean they are good people....snape is death eater, he is willing to repent and die for hp. Does its have anything to do with other children of school..i have read most of hp fanfics with more than 100 chapters and this novel is 1st which attracted me which doesn't hv a harem....

Martial soul is unique and gold finger is quite good, neither too much or too little. But Mc is too obsessed with his family. There is too much detailed and repeated explanation of things.

Very good novel... unique golden finger... auther did good without system...most people just give task system, i hate them the most.....may b it will b good if task can b generated by mc and system just give reward according to difficulty.