I have never read anything more braindead and outrageous than this ...like first of all how tf old bee deduced so much about what he knows and what not they don't have enough time to just keep looking at a young wizard expressions and even if he knows in a magical world with talent like prophecy and all it can be easily taken care of not to mention the way Snape is going about it even if he's not a dark lord he'd force him to be one and Dumbledore should know that better than anyone having taught one such person himself yet he allows him to do that? And last when did minerva become so dumb that she'd allow snape and even help him to literally freaking interrogate a first year like that in front of so many people it's completely braindead novel and last part he doesn't need to freaking go through all this bs since they don't want him there just tell them that he wants to transfer to other school like that one in France it's much better than Hogwarts anyways both in atmosphere and studies atm

I'd say it was going good but his battle and the way he dealt with kingaku and ginkaku completely annoyed the hell out of me , it's like author is trying to keep him week on purpose. Why you ask? He was at ss- rating and his age at that time was around freaking 21 after 10-15 years even if he didn't do anything but just keep his age at prime rating should remain same .i won't talk about how he always seem to end up creating troubles when he can just follow normal plot but how the hell by fighting and using seven gates his body becomes 67 yr old? And even his rating is reduced and the stupid explanation is 'oh it's really a forbidden technique ' like seriously? It's completely stupid and shows author is just trying to nerf him around so that he can become useless whenever he's needed and can't change Naruto main plot .

The author forces edgy berserker traits onto the protagonist—like emotional instability from the external bone mask—for no reason other than faux coolness, making him less relatable and more trope-ridden. The twin martial souls, both stronger than his parents', should've made reaching level 7 feasible without cheats, so calling his cultivation speed trash is just false drama. The transformation during his fourth ring absorption is blatant Ichigo-copy cringe, ignoring the lore where soul bones aren't meant to act like inner demons. He’s had a spirit bone since age six but hasn’t fully absorbed it despite countless chances, just so the author can milk cheap conflict or force greed-driven plotlines. An unabsorbed external bone defeats its purpose—it won’t grow with him, making it no better than a regular 100-year piece. It’s lazy writing, pure and simple. As if the edgy tropes weren’t enough, the author adds a second soul in the protagonist’s body—despite him being reborn from childhood, not a body takeover. Logically, there shouldn’t be another soul, yet somehow it’s still there, and everyone suddenly becomes smart enough to detect it. Then there's the divine bead, likely tied to the Dragon God, which is frustrating. The obsession with the Dragon God ignores the original’s lesson: intelligence and effort—like Tang San with the Sea God—matter more than clinging to a failed past power. Even if the divine bead isn’t related to the Dragon God, it’s still a lazy way to hand the protagonist another cheat. Instead of meaningful growth, the author brings out random powers with no logic or buildup, making the story feel forced and directionless. And the way he acted even wasted his second soul as if qian renxue was really going to die bro what's the point of knowing plot if you are gonna act like this even if you are worried you can't forget her grandpa is lvl99 he's practically invincible before god's starts popping out .Also the crap about that God that chose mubai is even more ridiculous why he's twisting so many things

I could already tell the MC would be a perv just from the title, but what's with these authors and their obsession with Kurenai? She's easily one of the most bland characters in the entire Naruto universe—both in looks and personality. Honestly, even Sakura has more depth. And then there's Kakashi randomly being placed in some made-up team, like the author just decided to erase Team 7 for the sake of a lazy plot. Also, how does it make any sense that Kurenai graduated while Obito—who’s from the same class and later becomes one of the strongest characters—didn’t? The logic is completely thrown out just to cram in some forced fanservice. I really can’t stand when comics throw canon out the window just for lust-driven storytelling. And seriously, why is Kurenai constantly put on a pedestal? She's weak, plain, and has never shown any meaningful growth. Even as an adult—she used that same weak technique on Itachi, of all people, showing how poor her threat assessment is. That’s basically the ceiling of her talent. But now, suddenly, the author wants us to believe she’s some genjutsu prodigy practicing advanced techniques early on? Come on. If the goal is to have the MC sleep with her, fine—but don’t pretend she’s some hidden genius we all somehow missed. She's always been mediocre at best. She’s always been pathetic and irrelevant. Also, I just realized it’s the same author behind Konoha Life Mentor, and his writing style is always the same: he turns the MC into a Tobirama 2.0, while everyone else is dumbed down to the point where even the most obvious statements sound like groundbreaking revelations—but only when the MC says them. It’s like no one in the entire village can think for themselves unless the MC spells it out, and suddenly it becomes some revolutionary idea that leaves everyone in awe. Also all his rewards seem good but they're useless so unless author can change it to talents or bloodline this novel will become one of those that just drags for no reason

It falls into the same tired trope of the "miserable MC" needing to "revitalize the clan/village" — as if every ninja village operates like some crumbling fantasy kingdom. The author seems to misunderstand how villages like Iwagakure (Stone) actually function. Phrases like "we barely have 4 Jonin left; we’ll be removed from the village" are completely nonsensical. Stone and Cloud don’t rely on kekkei genkai clans like Leaf or Mist — their strength comes from disciplined, hard-earned effort. Every Jonin is a valuable asset. No sane Kage would discard them over numbers. To justify this already shaky plot, the author adds that the clan supposedly staged a coup against the Third Tsuchikage — again, this doesn't hold up. Why would any clan in Iwa rebel against the legitimate heir of the Second Tsuchikage? This isn’t the Leaf or Mist where clans are constantly fighting for dominance due to powerful bloodlines. Iwa and Kumo are known for unity and cultivating strength through discipline, not internal power struggles. Even in the original series, Earth and Cloud were shining examples of stability despite lacking flashy abilities. And to top it off, we have a clan trying to defect during the Third Great Ninja War to the Mist Village — which is outright suicidal and borderline treason. The so-called clan leader even says he’s willing to sacrifice their elderly and children just to save five Jonin. Shouldn’t it be the other way around? If your clan is that desperate, you’d be protecting the future generation, not throwing them away. The timeline is inconsistent too. Obito is apparently alive, yet events like the Third Raikage’s death — which happened after Minato forced Iwa to retreat and refocus on Kumo — are supposedly taking place. It just doesn’t make sense. I’d give this 1 star based on the incoherent setup alone, but I’m giving it 2 out of generosity, hoping it somehow improves. So far, though, it’s built on a pile of bad logic and Naruto-world misconceptions.

It's a quite alright but there are few things I do think are stupid for example him keeping all his soul power always restrained with his dumb method he created like any body with little brain knows anyone will be auspicious when they can't sense your level at all so it's better to use it only for hiding his spirit ring color and to show his soul power as at least 10 less than what it is .. even worse is he just keeps telling others about the skills he created same is for xiao wu and same is for his grandpa although I get it you don't wanna hide it but you shouldn't freaking lay your cards bare either otherwise if you are so naive what's the point of you being a transmigrated person ffs

It's stupid and trash story

It's alright i guess

It's alright so far but I kinda like the theory of Naruto being brainwashed by kotoamatsukami but I don't think it was danzo who did it rather i feels it was itachi who did this before detecting on hiruzens request after all he was a psycho who even thought of brainwashing Sasuke later on when he gave that crow to Naruto and also if Naruto was brainwashed by danzo nine tails would notice it but if it was itachi he can easily put it under gengetsu using his mangekyo and then use shishui eye to brainwash Naruto. It also makes sense no matter how Naruto was treated he'd keep shouting about being hokage and only when he was facing Sasuke he'd ignore even his dream cuz asura chakra had more influence on that even temporary suppressing other brainwashing by his own obsession.

I get it that bibi dong was an idiot and could be considered betrayal if she leaves with that master guy but her killing him wasn't unjustified mf raped her and has the audacity to blame everything on her even if he wants to say that just fucking destroy her cultivation and let her leave with him since you want to make sure you don't end up strengthening the enemies that's all you need to do take back any spirit bones and stuff make her work to repay and let her marry whoever the fuck she wants but justifying original qianji lust and character with that crap is beyond me i somehow worry about what's going on with chinese education to end up producing idiots like this .