The novel is bad, the MC just a puppet created by the author to full fill his imagination about anime, why i say this ??, because the MC doesn't have the character of humanistic, first the MC have overpower cheat but he still became a slave to rias, why ?? It just because the author doesn't like issei and want to make the MC take his place, so the MC is just a puppet that the author write, this is that make this novel completely trash, i mean if the mc don't have superpower, or don't have a way to become stronger, it's ok to be slave to other stronger being, but when you have limitless talent, a cheat, and time you still become slave just show you are not human so this novel is bad
MC wasted his system autoplay points on breaking the limbs of bullies.
His first instinct is to auto-play his way out of the situation instead of dealing with it a smarter way.
Seriously? He said afterwards that the points were hard to obtain and then he uses it for this...
Chapter 4: ""What a huge loss! What a huge loss! 20 true spirit! Back to square one." Li Xi felt as if his body had been hollowed out."
Also prepare for the MC to be targeted unknowingly by a foundation building cultivator when he is at qi refining. This book is just so bad.
Additionally, MC literally uses system auto play functions to deux ex out of any situation.
I honestly don’t understand why people leave negative ratings without actually reading. There’s nothing wrong with this novel — it’s a genuinely good story. The world-building and power system are excellent, the pacing and tone are balanced, and it offers both depth and comedic relief. It’s truly sad to see such a solid work buried under impulsive hate.
This isn’t another “invincible MC who kills and sleeps his way through everything.” The system actually helps him socialize — and that’s meaningful, since his popularity directly affects his strength and opportunities. The protagonist feels like a breath of fresh air among all the cruel, woman-hunting types. He’s kind, helpful, and rational — but not saintly. He doesn’t sacrifice himself for others; he simply acts human. Unfortunately, readers now seem to prefer edgy, cold protagonists, which is why thoughtful novels like this sit at 2★ while mindless power-fantasy ones get 5★.
Early on, he spent his points dealing with bullies — a smart move, since losing there would have damaged his prestige. And no, he doesn’t “waste” his system powers; he only uses the deduction function when it’s truly necessary. He’s careful, strategic, and not pathetic.
Honestly, this author deserves more appreciation. Even in their other novel (one of my favorites too), I saw the same unfair one-star reviews from peple who clearly didn’t read beyond a few chaptrs. This author actually brings new concepts and structure to the ovrused cultivation world — but sadly, many readers only want “power-up, kill, repeat.”
There are a few things I dislike about this novel and even the author’s other works — mainly the theme of human supremacy. I understand it’s common in many cultivation novels, but I still find it frustrating. It always ends up the same — either other races are exterminated or treated as sworn enemies of humanity. It feels hypocritical: humans destroy other races but labled utterly evil if they do same.
It might not suit everyone’s taste or pacing preference, but it’s far from bad.
A good novel doesn't have the clichés of an urban novel. In my opinion, a well-written story, except for a few mistakes.
The problem is her age. If she was 17 or 18, she would be great, but the Chinese have a habit of showing the character as young in the story. I don't know why.
Another one, from the beginning she says she's 14, until now, chapter 279, she's still 14. The author forgot to increase her age, even though it's been about 1.5 years.
Third, smoking and drinking wasn't illegal at that time, for underage people, but there's no need to mention that she smokes and drinks every minute.
Then the issue of money arises, it's as if he forgets how much money he has, and it decreases with each episode.
MC just hurt Morale for no reason. Having a warmongering lunatic leading your camp is extremely depressing and also Mc is misogynistic, if you’re a woman that can cook do laundry take care of the camp, cleaning basically keeping the morale up Mc just say woman are useless cuz T dog or man can do it. Just imagine you’re a man in the camp doing a loot run killing zombies go home do your laundry, cook, clean, kinda depressing.
Honestly, I don’t like protagonists with multiple personalities. It makes it difficult for readers to truly understand the main character’s nature. That said, the concept is still intriguing and plots flows smoothly enough. However, the world-building falls short of expectations. The power ranking system, along with the various abilities outside of martial arts, feels incomplete and poorly explained. There’s not even a clear distinction between power levels (energy level wise, ability intensity, destruction capabilities wise) like F→E→D→C→B→A→S or a simple rank system such as 1, 2, 3, 4—to provide structure or scale. Even if author doesn't want to go into detail— a simpler level according to destruction capabilities like building destroying level=b, city destroying level=a, continent destruction level=S would have been better than nothing.
The social structure is also highly unrealistic. Superpowered individuals are treated carelessly despite being valuable assets to society—especially when supernatural events are running rampant. It's impossible for the higher ups of the nation to be so stupid and not utilise the super powers by giving benefits. So why in hell aren’t these individuals registered or protected by supportive laws? Even those affiliated with the government seem to have little wealth or social standing.
Moreover, the payment for clearing supernatural events—especially through non-government organizations—is ridiculously low, barely higher than a decent part-time job. Like hell it's possible!! Why would they risk their lives for such little money instead of exploiting their power for personal gain? Like robbing the rich. Given their unstable mental states, it’s hard to believe they’d all remain law-abiding citizens. Besides why would the rich joke with their lives by underpaying the very people who protect them? The setting is riddled with logical inconsistencies, and honestly, it’s a letdown.
Overall good, but a bit slow and some plot are kinda redundant or too long. Btw kosmo here is too weak compared to tge one in saint seiya, but maybe its because the difference of universe. 6th sense should be able to kill the so called godking at ease, but even if greatly nerf here limit douluo using 6th sense should be able to easily defeat the so called gods, otherwise it doesn't deserve its power
I have some issues with this web novel.
First, I want to know more about why she has pheromones. Like, how does that work? She has no glands, does it just come out of her skin? And why does it only work when she is wet?
Second, hmm, how do I say this without spoiling it... I feel that a major part around the 70% mark of this book should have been foreshadowed, considering she was wary of the guy the entire time. If you're wary of someone, I think you'd be more sensitive to what they're doing, she probably would've noticed something.
Third, I just find it funny that I'm 78% of the way into this book and her romance hasn't progressed at all with the love interest. It just makes it so ironic, considering she kisses one dude three times, and with two other dudes she's just looking at their muscles like, "Wow." I can't believe the dudes have more of a chance than the clear love interest when this is a yuri. I mean, seriously, I'm 78% of the way through, and the love interest does not seem like she has a chance. Although the MC has slept with her, it kind of just felt like she was punishing her, whereas with the dudes she seemed at least a bit interested. By saying she doesn't feel like she has a chance, it's more like I don't feel like the MC would fall in love with her, she actively avoids her and looks at her like a nuisance. I don't think she's going to fall in love with her when she looks at her like she is a pest. But well, I suppose she does, because this is a yuri and she is the only woman in love with her.
I'm sure there are more things wrong with this, but these are just the ones I can think of at the moment.
Fourth-
I want to suggest you a novel.
Name: Conquering Myriad Heavens Through Simulation.
There would be some grammar mistakes at the start but your patience will pay off, and if it is too much for you, you can read the one with AI till 40 chapters, you can find it on author page.
Synopsis:-
Lin Chen, a young man from Earth died in an unfortunate accident and traveled to another world.
Just when he was born his family was brutally exterminated, but luckily he survived with the help of an old servant.
But, because he was very handsome, people thought he was just a pretty boy and didn't know about the way of the world. So, no one gave him job.
Just when he was about to die of starvation, the System arrived.
The system said that the host can simulate his future life and get various talent of different levels after the system upgrade.
Not only that, the system also has many functions that remains to be discovered...
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It's my first time writing, so dear readers guide me well.
and there will be no FML in this book.
And I hope you all should enjoy this series with me.
The MC will not built foundation for a very long time but after building the foundation his growth speed will be very fast.
So, I hope the dear readers will be patient, and wait for a little longer.
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Warning: Please do not enter, if you want a real world development within a simulation novel.
Link:—
https://m.webnovel.com/book/33052603300266005
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About this book.
It is a nice one.
Edit: Too much racism
This is really good. I especially like that Di Jun here is a Saint and has the ability to make the other Saints defer to him. Since he is the Heavenly Emperor, they have to for the sake of their disciples. The only issue is that the Journey to the West part of this fic is taking too long. I hope it doesn't continue past 350.