What’s the point of rebirth if you can’t even held your head high, just kill yourself and be done with it.

Author’s always make the MC start with the lowest of the low aptitude that will never change. Just give him a cheat or golden finger with average aptitude.

The MC should be low key and loner so he doesn’t have too many distraction. I like it that it is not brainless but I haven’t read enough. I want mc be a bit more cold blooded, ruthless and decisive.

Finally his suppose wife is a bigshot, well BIGSHOT my ASSS…

Edit: I thought it would be him and his wife/wives in the present life but he had rebirth and all the problems start from there. Annoying trope, mc personality is weak and many more that my brain is rotting from inside out.

MC spent 1 spirit stone for 100 taels of silver. Biggest rip off ever. Then he uses it to buy pills for his uncle and aunt who were the ones who stole his parent's pension and abused him. For context, he saved for 3 years to get around 30 spirit stones. So that's more than a month's worth of spirit stones.

Chapter 14: A few days ago, he had quietly gone to a nearby town, exchanged one Low-Grade Spirit Stone for a hundred taels of silver, and then used a few taels of silver to buy the most ordinary "Body-Strengthening Pills" at a pharmacy.

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MC chose a really difficult technique and he is willing to waste his life stuck in a crappy realm for a chance to get an extra 3 years of life for a minor breakthrough. Really...

Chapter 8: "But the effect was irresistible: three extra years of Lifespan per minor Breakthrough, and endless recovery speed."

Chapter 20: ""He possessed the daily intelligence, which was already a tremendous advantage. All he needed was patience.

If a month didn't work, then a year. If a year didn't work, then ten years.

His Lifespan was 120 years; he could afford to wait."

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Mc also spends years cultivating without taking advantage of daily intelligence. So cheat is wasted.

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MC has to be suppressed so even an endless amount of spirit stones still means he is at qi refining. Cultivation method is useless if the realm is low...

Chapter 50: "The deeper he Cultivated, the more he sensed the Withered Wood Meets Spring Scripture's vastness—and the terrifying amount of Spiritual Qi each layer required."

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-1 star: MC already cultivating the path so where does the big favor come from?

Chapter 62: "This piece of information was worth far more than those two Spirit Medicines. It was guidance on the Dao, and in the cultivation world it counted as half a mastership."

Dropped the novel bc mc willingly exploited and he knows exactly how but still gives pills. CH73.

I am disappointed. The idea was nice, but poor execution.

1. In a world were demon beasts are a threat, you don't have vagabonds raping women, killing children and constituting nuisance, you have hunters because humans are creatures of survival. The author has a low IQ.

2. Why are they hiding cultivation techniques when there are demon beast threats? Why not spread all the techniques for all realms (except the last realm) since the distance between places are ridiculously large. One strong beast could wipe out villages and counties before anyone strong enough could interfere. In this kind of world, the powerful that rules like this won't have a nation to rule.

+1 - Writing Quality and story.

+1- MC, he doesn't need to say any cringe dialogue like other MC, he already has Aura which say's "Don't mess with me".

+1- Side character and character development.

+1- World building and setting.

+1- No Harem and there's many Explicit content so it's doesn't feel gea

Basically a chief kiss.

Few things or points....a wasted potential...system ruins it.

1. It might be good but in don't like chattring treasure inside MC, especially if it is not women it gives me gay feeling. Speaking of which why he didn't get any cultivation method or technique from it, wasn't his spirt was from primodial cultivation era?

2. Why did he hunt spirit beast by himself, can't he wait, why do unnecessary work? His explanation was full of loop holes, you you really think spirit hall is rightous organisation (no one is).

3. His spirit can't deserve that grand name. Is he a twin Marital soul ? But inhavent seen it! If not then what is in synopsis.

4. Feels like system slave, can't even think or make dicison without it. And what type of system is this can't even give special spirit rings while it can give power spirit? He still need to kill beast for Power like a brute demonic cultivator? For human supermacy ?Truly useless.

5. His treasure all living beings equal kasaya makes him invincible? What's it's limit?why not use it as innate domain?

6. Becoming hero, was nesseresry? He got himself in trouble and plot Armor saved him, can't tang hao found out about you in so many days? Truely rediculous.

7. I can't understand this heartbeat, red face and leg weak behaviour no matter how beautiful the women one should not go through this situation even for virgins who haven't seen a women.... truly a cringe take. Also it boring cringe watery words. Also ...how he interact zhu zhuqing feel like a simp.

8.In competition you can't use weapon outside of body, so why can you use your weapon, vajra?

9. 29 level at 12 i can understand author nerf him to match with tang san but was it really nesseresry?

The MC here is a complete system slave in disguise.

Novel Summary is fake, the story are split into daily life, and system mission.

Daily life basically the same as the original, since the mc is not a transmigrator who knew the plot.

System mission is just repetitive content with extra water.

mc go to mission world, gather loot, upgrade return to daily life, back to system mission and repeat.

ability are all label as Chinese martial art.

Interesting world building, but you only get that once every 10-20 chapter of the mc repetitive action. and very small amount of information too.

It's not Vishnu and Hinduism, go around boasting that others were his Avatars and such.

In hinduism original text

Follows avtar, Karma, duty, reincarnation, creation, preservation and distruction ,

Please read original mythology when commenting on other religions.

Hinduism is not boasting anything unlike your chinese mythology where original mythology only reach scale power of small scale or planet level and even trying to boast power level in fan-fic.

i got this from chinese ai deep-seek:

MYTHOLOGY COMBAT RANKING(Based on Original Texts)

■ Tier 1: Multiversal / Omnipotent

1. Hindu Mythology- Top Gods: Brahma (Creation), Vishnu (Preservation), Shiva (Destruction)

- Feats: Shiva's Tandava ends universes; Vishnu dreams realities into existence.- Scale: Infinite (beyond time/space).

3.Buddhist Cosmology(Vajrayana/Tibetan)- Top God: Adi-Buddha (Primordial Buddha)- Feats: Śūnyatā (emptiness) transcends form.- Scale: Infinite void

■ Tier 2: Universal / Cosmic

4. Greek Mythology- Top Gods: Zeus, Kronos, Ouranos- Feats: Titanomachy reshaped the cosmos; Zeus' thunderbolts threaten Olympus.- Scale: Solar system to universal

5. Norse Mythology- Top Gods: Odin, Thor, Ymir- Feats: Ymir's corpse forms the world; Ragnarök destroys and rebirths reality.- Scale: Planetary to universal (cyclical)

6. Egyptian Mythology- Top Gods: Ra, Osiris, Apophis- Feats: Apophis devours the sun.- Scale: Stellar (solar system-level)

7. Mesopotamian Mythology- Top Gods: Marduk, Tiamat, Anu- Feats: Tiamat's body forms heaven/earth; Marduk structures the cosmos.- Scale: Planetary to cosmic

■ Tier 3: Planetary / Stellar

8. Japanese Mythology (Shinto)- Top Gods: Amaterasu, Susano’o, Izanagi- Feats: Susano’o slays Orochi.- Scale: Planetary (Amaterasu = star-level)

9. Celtic Mythology- Top Gods: The Dagda, Lugh, Morrigan- Feats: Morrigan influences battles.- Scale: Continental to planetary

10. Chinese Mythology- Top Gods: Pangu, Jade Emperor, Sun Wukong- Feats: Pangu's body forms the world;

- Scale: Planetary (Pangu = world-creation)

He wants to hide his skill development but instead of telling that he learned archery when young he is telling that he bought a bow yesterday and suddenly he is a top Archer who can shoot bullseye 🎯 within 20 feet

he is intruding on their hunting team but instead of trying to cooperate(not flatter) he is acting like he is some sort of bigshot

he should have develop a medical profession

so knowing that there are refugees around his house he still didn't wake up his mother and left silver on the note like WTF if he wants his mother dead then the author should kill her and not waste our time

he spent 10 taels of silver just to become outer disciple but if he had use that money to study it would have been much easier

for a normal person the way he expresses emotions is just too overrated:

eyes quickly gets cold

heart tightening without any reason(he saw a poison herb which was a distance away from him and it wasn't a miasma herb but a normal herb which on eating causes diarrhea)

staying silent for no reason like it makes him cool but no it makes him a idiot because when he needs to be silent he is blurting out how he can master shit so much faster

so when that niu guy came instead of just accepting his apology you have to listen to wang guy insulting that person who by now will definitely hate you why why

there is no proper time like it stated that lecture will be for 5 days but it got finished in 1 day and he is eating in cafeteria so why tf is he bringing rice for eating

he left his mother to die abd didn't worried about it,but when he has to go home for inspection he is suddenly worried and complaining about trust bro anyone will test you

the cultivation system is so complex and MC tends to master skills without any guidance which tends to complicat a lot especially with the wording author used