This is good....i just dislike mc's attitude that's it...,,

Even if mc has any intrest in original harem of xiao yan including xuner I won't care., usually i dislike it...(the reason is very simple a guy comes throw a favouabilty card from system or use memory change or blackmailing ...i couldn't accept someone ruining good story.... otherwise make it smut content...if it's novel i dislike such things.....here mc is cultivating feelings and all which is good)

I didn't meant how he treats xiao yan.... Mc is good brother with xiao yan which is ok..

neither he first planned lay low until xiao yan become Dou di and directly become Dou sheng lying down.... (Technically it actually has a flaw....can weak mc in xiao family escape from Yun lan sect dou king who attacked xiao family or escape from soul hall protectors....)

I also dislike how mc let go of xiao yu in early chapter....if his cultivation was low xiao yu should have broken his leg minimum...lol.....i were mc i should have crippled her bruh.....if opponent only wanted to spar it's ok.... (it's like a guy stabbing me intent to kill while i only want to block him and let him go) i dislike such nonsense......is xiao yu beautiful indeed but there is no less than 1,000 of beautiful woman on dou qi continent and her talent is very low too .

Mc heart nature is too bad...

He was lazy to being Alchemist...

Author idea of putting xiao xuan as Transmigrator benefit is dumb.... (Xiao xuan care about xiao family as whole not exclusively to mc..... Xiao xuan has his own pov ... Unlike system exclusive to mc..

Even the weakest system in cultivation novel can give you some benefits infinitely.,,let alone ones in xianxia...

Xiao xuan is indeed good but only in Dou qi continent.... after mc ascend to great 1000 worlds....,i read novel and watched Donghua... power level there is too broken....

I have no intrest in considering xiao xuan as powerful golden finger let alone weak.... if it was soul body of supreme expert great 1000 worlds or beyond it will naturally qualify

A string of nonsense. MC just migrated and took the template of a character I didn't know, and his skill skyrocketed. But he needed to get stronger to escape the monster mountain range, so he worshipped someone with only a week left to live as a teacher. What do you think his teacher taught him first? An attack method. Yes, he first taught an ordinary person an attack method, and MC learned it first. Then he taught it to the Xuan level and used it, then he taught it to the Earth level and used it. Remember, MC is an ordinary person. Then he meditated for six days and rose from 0 to Dou Huang level. When his teacher died, he wept bitterly and called him father, a man he hadn't even known for a day. Being grateful is normal, but this feeling is abnormal. Then he learned that Yunshan was the reason his teacher died, so he rushed to Yunshan's sect with his peak Dou Huang level. Yes, Dou Huang. If you can become Dou Huang in six days, why not meditate for a few more days and wait until you reach Dou Zun or Dou Sheng?Yunshan is now Dou Zong, and the man behind him in the Spirit Palace is also mid-level. What is MC relying on to attack? Luckily, Yunshan wasn't in the sect, so he took Yun as his servant—yes, the disciple of the man he was going to kill. I wouldn't be surprised if he was poisoned one day while serving. Then MC came to his senses and said he couldn't defeat Yunshan, so he ascended to Dou Zong. After that, there was no point. He practiced alchemy for a month, maybe even longer, and became a Level 6 alchemist. He summoned everyone in the Jerma Empire to show them he was a Level 6 alchemist. As if being Dou Zong wasn't enough of a deterrent. And it didn't seem like he had improved at all during that time. I couldn't stand it anymore.

The MC in chapter 11: "I don't care, System! You need to compensate me! You know how weak I am right now, and I'm short on manpower in this world. I might be killed at any moment... blah blah blah..."

The dialogue above is an example of what a trash ungrateful Chinese person might say if they were isekai'd into an anime world. Even though he already have a cheat, the motherfucker is still demanding more from his system while doing absolutely nothing. What a great display of China national culture👏

Edit 09/25: Well, I was just about to reread this book when apparently someone got butthurt when reading this.

First of all, sorry "Mr. Mature" guy for being an edgy teenager liking this book.

And YES, this book whole concept is being cool. Is it wrong? No, most certainly not.

Have you seen The Eminence in Shadow? That's right, the iconic [I am Atomic!], Cid Kagenou. What is the whole concept of that show/book?

IT'S BEING COOL!

They don't give a crap about reason or backstory whatsoever, the most important it looks - COOL.

The show was popular, millions of people reposting making a meme out of it, in conclusion - they like it. So does that make the millions of people who like that concept an "edgy teenager"?

As for being calm for the sake of it, what's the point of the Male Lead panicking when he is the strongest being on earth? Have you seen Thanos fully armed with infinity gauntlet panicking?

Lastly, I want to ask you dear sir, what kind of "elegant work", for one to be acknowledge as non-edgy? Perhaps, Dora the Explorer?

Original: Amazing. This is my conclusion after reading this masterpiece. Exaggeration? Definitely not. At first I was interested because White Album 2 was mentioned in the synopsis, I started reading without any prior knowledge and - I got hooked immediately. If you're looking for a near perfect Fanfic, then I would recommend this every time. I won't go into detail because Deanbruhl already gave a review of it and it pretty much cover the things that made this novel so good. Final Score: 5/5 (Would love to give it a 10 if I could.)

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Garbage among garbage, pure slop just as I thought. These top ranking lists are always trash because you never get to see the initial build up and it all just pointless hyping up the MC. The same thing of MC is not known to people so others think the best is someone famous then random MC comes in and slaps face of everyone. Then does a back story of the MC to make him seems cooler, but it's like you did all that but no one knows?

The only novel I care to check for updates daily. Lost two stars because of how he handled the uchiha massacre and the hyuga rebellion. Extremely little thought or planning was put into it. From a leaders standpoint he did an extremely poor job. Most of the uchiha (3/4) were still killed. Only a small portion of the branch family left. Sasuke was left behind, fugakus mangekyo was left behind, itachi is still alive, sarutobi and danzo are still in power and suffered minor damage at best. Naruto hinata and menma are still in the village. All of this could have been solved with a snap of the Mc's fingers or a single kunai from minato. He could have easily overpowered all obstructions in his way and taken the whole uchiha clan or had Minato teleported them away especially since they had inside men who could have prepared ahead for them, instead he lost a strategic asset of nearly 3/4 of one of the most powerful clans. Most of the branch hyuga weren't even aware that they were going to rebel so only like 57 of them left. Sasuke could have been easily brought along, fugaku, even if he chose to die should have had his mangekyo retrieved. The younger they aquire Naruto, the more likely they are to change his determination to be hokage to protecting star country. So all in all, the operation was an overwhelming strategic and moral loss for shura. In total he missed out on 3/4 of the uchiha family, most of the hyuga branch family, Sasuke the reincarnation of indra and Naruto the reincarnation of Asura. What's more, it's shown later that the left behind branch hyuga are extremely resentful for being left behind. An absolute blunder on the writers part. The only way it could have gone worse is if everyone died. Overall, it was an exceptional letdown on the authors part and if I was in China I would directly contact him and beg him to rewrite the 10 chapters dedicated to the rebellion. (all of this is found on mtl BTW, it'll be the next 5-8 chapters after 243. Absolute and utter letdown. 2/10 execution.

I really like this one.

Humans got transported into a survival game in a Post-apocalyptic horror cultivation world.

Rather than the usual zombie or mutation it's a type I really like where the apocalypse is full of Cosmic horrors, ghosts, anomalies and weird/eerie Creatures.

Usually I hate when doomsday or apocalyptic novel turned into cultivation, but in this one it just fits very well. it's in a world where the cultivator already lost, immortals gone, even gods got corrupted.

Other aspect I like is the community being an important feature in the story. The forums played a big part in the grand survival of all Players including the MC. It was enjoyable reading the humans band together through the forums to survive. The main theme of the story seems to revolve around surviving together rather than fierce competition.

The only thing I dislike a bit is the Author used to much luck and coincidence as a tool in resolving some problem the MC have.