For me, with experience of reading 1000 + novels, I found this novel very good.

Why because it is relaxed and thankfully more humane and for a sane mind it is mind blowing with it's world building. I can't wait for the ultimate truth of Luo Feng verse. Luo Feng has suffered a lot in Swallowed Star (SS) 1 and in SS 2 he deserves a relaxed mindset and invincible posture. His morality and conduct are also positive and enviable. Some ill barain may don't like it and it's their problem. The way author shaped the plot is interesting and somewhat unique. For example in almost all novels where reviving someone is possible, the revival usually occures at the end of the novel and all live happily ever after. But here, Luo Feng revived almost all past figures in the middle of the novel. For me it was a different angle to see the plot . I do find some conceptual problems like lord Xu seeing future etc. It is more like knowing all possible outcomes, can get information from all potential future possibilities in advance. And when future becomes reality or is nearing the manifestation he immediately knows. A good thought provoking aspect.

I wanted to see some romance and heart warming scenes but Alas.

The power system is grand and level of living beings at top is massive. Time frame is also very relative. For lord's doing somethings can pass epochs and for for lower level being 1 epoch is almost eternity.

All in all a great novel.

Suggestions :

Author should have mentioned and given time to some SS 1 side characters and their daily lives. Like lover of king zheran the monkey king, the beautiful charming girl along with team that ventured into extraterrestrial battlefield. Star Fantasy king Etc.

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This novel is very confusing. Objectively bad, subjectively (maybe) intresting?

First of all, the time doesn't add up at all. His girl got pregnant than 1-2months time skip, then information gets revealed about the entrance exam which is 2 months later but it is also her due date for giving birth? And no, there were no hidden time skips in between because we have actually time stamps inside the novel, like last month was this and this test after which he got the info and so on.

Everyone seems to forget how strong mc is, even mc himself? He used a force exceeding 800kg multiple times without fancy techniques in front of people but everyone thinks he only has 280kg force? He defeated a mid-martial apprentice 2 months prior but they are supprised he can beat a robot that was even weaker than said person?

He also only practised the first day he got the system and than 2 month not anymore because his proficiency didn't go up but he somehow still trains every night?

Btw the world itself is build horrible, he marries but we never hear everyone talking about it, not even from the parrents that wanted to stop it, not even after she got pregnant nobody wonders where the girl disappeared to? There are no characters outside the mc and even he is barely there. Also, why does he still participate in the entrance exam if he is a stay home dad 24h a day?

I could mention many more things like the xia family that somehow got the impression he wants to climb the social ladder because he met their little miss while being on a mission even with him saying openly that he doesn't give a shit about her or some other things but I guess you already got an impression of this novel.

In short, confusing, disjointed, objectively bad.

But barely readable as a numbers go up, popcorn novel I guess.

That's my point at chapter 15 maybe it will change later but it really doesn't give good first impressions.

Edit: it gets worse...don't read it.

Author mentions stuff at the end of a chapter but forgets it in the first sentence of the next.

The story is decently interesting and well written enough to pass the time. But there are some glaring issues that make me reluctant to recommend it to anyone beyond just passing time.

Overall I don't recommend to read this novel unless you have nothing else to read, 3/5.

First, the timeline is messed up in many minor and major ways.

The MC eventually becomes a genin under Yuhi Shinka Jonin, in year 34 of Konoha, where he is still single, when Kurenai should have been born in year 33.

On that note, one member of the squad is Uchiha Mikoto who is in the squad at 12 years old, when she should be 13 being 3 years older than Kushina and Minato, who are both only 8 years old instead of 10. The MC graduated in his first year at 7 years old, Ninja school is meant to start at 5 years old, meaning the ages of basically every named character is wrong by a not so insignificant margin.

Not to mention how the MC graduated in less than a year, which is even faster than the future Kakashi who had the praise of literally everyone, whereas the MC is seemingly not on the radar of anyone at all despite his insane accomplishment.

Another major timeline issue is that fact that the Second Shinobi War should have started by this point, but for some reason it has not.

Onto the character of the MC himself... to be honest I like his outline with regards to growth and the system, since it isn't actually too fast paced and ridiculous compared to some others out there.

Although his personality is annoying af when it comes to interacting with other characters, constantly being a perv and ogling at literally every named female character, and even the OC Female teacher character. It gets extremely annoying the more it goes on, and it doesn't help that the MC himself says and does some stupid things because, I assume, the author is a down bad mf, even describing the 12 year old Mikoto in a very weird way. Not to mention the system seems to be trying to push the relationship despite how forced it seems.

Wrong Summary! Here's the right summary:

Xu Fu traveled to the American comic world and became a member of the Mutant Academy.

Knowing well the dangers of the Marvel world, Xu Fu stayed quietly in the Mutant Academy, continuing his old fishing trade from his previous life.

I was planning to live a lazy life, but I never expected to activate the fishing system!

The first day of fishing: Super Template: Perfectly inherited Superman’s powerful body, with unlimited possibilities!

The second day of fishing: Clown thinking: Perfectly inheriting the clown's IQ and thinking ability, everything in the world is calculated!

Day 5 of Fishing: Portal: The most basic and profound magic from Kamar-Taj, which allows you to cross the planet in a single thought!

The tenth day of fishing: Green Lantern Ring: A powerful artifact from the DC Origin World. As long as you have enough willpower, you can create anything!

…

Xu Fu said helplessly: I just wanted to be a fisherman, but I accidentally became invincible...

Could be a decent 4, but a few things drag it down to a **2.5–3.5** for me.

Some things just bugged me. For example, they called him *Thatch* in the first chapter — he should be dead, even if it's just a mistake. If the author doesn't know this, I can't trust the rest of the story.

As for the comment below, a strong physique doesn't automatically mean strong Haki. Haki is a skill, not just raw strength. If physical power was tied to Haki, all Sea Kings and giants would be masters, but they’re not. Look at Roger — his body was weak, but his Haki made him legendary. Physical strength doesn’t affect Haki.

Then there's Kaido's fruit. It’s already awakened. He controls lightning, wind, clouds, and heals ridiculously fast — all signs of an awakened Zoan. The fight with Kaido felt more like friendly bickering, which shouldn’t happen. The forced "awakening" just weakens the story.

My biggest pet peeve is the constant pointless monologues. The MC talks way too much with every opponent, including Imu and the Five Elders. Even if Imu is a transmigrator like the MC, how does it help him in battle? It only weakens his alliance and makes the MC look pathetic. He's the most talkative MC I've seen in *One Piece*.

Also, there’s a theory about immortality and tattoos on the arms of the “God’s Knights.” Shanks cutting off his arm might be a way of breaking free from their control. Whitebeard did the same in a flashback. But here, Imu seems like a shadow monarch, somehow reviving people he’s already killed. That’s pure BS. If that was possible, Luffy and the others would have no chance in the future. Even though i gte it it's for the sake of farming points for mc that author doesn't kill them off completely ,i can't help but say the whole setting feels ridiculous.

Though it did ended alright ,at least from all the one piece fanfics i have read it's good enough for a decent time pass. If you are like me few things will irritate you to the point of ranting like I did here lol but you can at least read it to finish so there's that

This novel felt boring and frustrating for me, mainly because of the MC. Almost every MC in these types of stories wants chaste, serious women—and I have no problem with that, since I share the same preference. But in the very first chapter, this MC is shown playing around in bars, hooking up with random women. He doesn’t even care about the girl whose virginity he takes; he only fears she might call the police. If she were pregnant, it’s clear that without the system, he would’ve simply run away.

Heck, even after getting the system, he didn’t go look for her. She was drugged, she was poor, and she seemed to be a serious girl who cared a lot about her first time. Losing it in such a way left her in her most vulnerable position, and he slept with her unprotected. Even if it wasn’t entirely his fault, shouldn’t he at least confirm she’s alright? Instead, he just cowered, afraid of jail. Truly a wonderful, fan-favorite protagonist...

Most heroines are written with a “purity value” of 100, but why isn’t the MC held to the same standard? Even if he wants a harem, why lower himself to meaningless one-night stands? Worse, he isn’t even sincere toward the women he is with right now—he just drifts along, shallow and insincere. To me, that makes him not just cowardly and irresponsible, but also hypocritical.

What bothers me most is how the novel tries to equate this behavior with masculinity. But does sleeping with many women really make someone masculine? To me, that feels like fake masculinity. True masculinity should come from responsibility, discipline, and commitment—not promiscuity. The story fails here because it doesn’t match its own ideals, and that hypocrisy ruined it for me.

I know many people (probably 90% of the male audience) will enjoy this type of “stud MC” because he’s living the dream life they fantasize about. But for me, it all feels shallow, and I just can’t respect it.

Also you r spending so much what if one of them betry you one day? System doesn't have favourbility locking. It's pure unrelaitic.