Trash novel.

The MC is shown as transmigrated but keeps showing a naive and crybaby mindset when facing his system and disciple.

The female disciple is an ingrate—a ruthless empress type who backstabbed her master once before rebirth. She immediately tries to sever ties with the MC after rebirth, even after seeing that he tried to sacrifice his life to save his backstabbing bitch disciple before her rebirth. Only after realizing she can hear his mind's voice (or inner voice) does she stay. Even then, she only stays after confirming there were benefits; otherwise, the bitch would have backstabbed him even after knowing the real melodramatic story through that inner voice shit.

The MC's system is also a shit product. It keeps throwing electrical whips straight at the MC's soul, saying dogshit like he stepped inside with his left foot instead of his right in front of his disciple, frying him in an electrical net at every given chance.

The rewards for completing system tasks are also tailored to his disciple. For example, the immortal technique he got from the system has usage conditions like "16 years old, virgin, female, cold-hearted pussy disciple," and so on. Meanwhile, his reward is a partial growth technique with impossible growth conditions for a weak ass.

Finally, the system is a stingy, neurotic bitch who should have gone first to lick that icy pussy-bone disciple rather than sticking with the naive, pathetic MC.

The author is also a talented person just like his icy disciple, showing flashbacks like a history line and expecting readers to imagine character feelings as if we know everything. He types out a few tragic stereotypes without fleshing out the background. Do they expect us to PUA ourselves into liking a backstabbing bitch just because he portrays her as a well-known "icy pussy bone" trope ?

Nah, this novel is not my cup of tea. I'm sick of underdog novel style. Jack of all trade, gain power on many spells and skills, but his cultivation level sucks. On top of that his system seems to not be able to overcome QI stage to fundation building stage. MC has to seeks his own cultivation method to break through fundation stage. Why can't MC be powerful for once? Why have to be a low level cultivation level but with the bless of all skills to overcome the higher level cultivator? This style is getting very very old. Reading MC grinding his practice to gain a little here and there, got all kind of support skills to the max level, but can't get his own cultivation level to the upper class, have to grind it slowly, boring. See many of this style, a slow progress kind of style, it would've work well if the system not involved. System suppose to help MC fast track his cultivation, but no no no no, he still a low level stuff. I mean in this novel MC progress might not been slow, but the way how the writer wrote it make it seem like MC cultivation level progress at a turtle pace. Sucks. I lost my interest in this novel and this slow progress, underdog novel style, sick of it, very boring.

I don't like how MC have children with 3 randoms... and also loves owing random people favors for doing things he can do himself? Mc seriously needs to stop owing favors and being roped into random @ss things. Mc can easily solo things but brings burdens along every dam time. Also the author deliberately makes difficulty protag goes thru way higher by making every place he goes to implode. Also this guy is addicted to women, literally every subordinate is a woman.

Update: I am donezo with this book, mc somehow decides to expose himself and now everyone is pushing MC around. He has 0 foresight. I would rather read a 0 brain book than have read this complete garbage with MC exposing himself for basically no reason. Also mc somehow can never say no.

The novel is complete and utter garbage. First of all, the power system is all sorts of messed up. Second, the first cheat the Mc unlocked allows him to steal bloodlines and his passion as a scientist and status gives him access to many very powerful bloodlines and he just... Doesn't steal them. He trains In sealing techniques all day, ignoring everything else. He was both Minato and kushina Disciple and didn't warn them at all about the night of the ninetails. I can understand wanting to keep your future knowledge close to your chest but seriously, those two literally taught him everything they knew and he didn't offer up even the smallest amount of information. Not even an 'teacher, I have a second bloodline that sometimes gives me glimpses of the future'. The dude thought that his 'almighty presence' would be enough. He was even happy to let kushina die as long as he could save Minato. The dude is just a straight up ungrateful piece of garbage. So literally all aspects are trash. The cheat is powerful, but useless in the hands of an idiot. The power system is infected with Chinese bullcrap like medicinal baths, cultivation, meridians and other nonsense. And worst of all is the Mc is an ungrateful psychopath unwilling to offer even some small information to save the people who gave him everything for fear of compromising himself even slightly. Overall just a hot pile of trash.

The serie is imposing alot of things against mc, mc is like a lucky fool to survive and get items by plot armor. mc isnt cautious type, he like to mingle with every thing he see. Usually when mc from other books know they would get skills and talents just by leveling up, they would try to be low key and cultivate silently, but this mc is fighting everyone he sees to death, even when he is running away or hiding under fake name , he involve himself in more mess,that is so dumb... even after foundation establishment he choose to jump up and down for some incomplete manual while declining other people so these people target him and mc fight again instead of cultivating, is your blade give extra exp for killing enemies? did your slipper give more agility for jumping up and down? author should rename the novel plot armor and killing everything he sees instead of immortality and cultivation. 404 Error Cultivation not found. (fyi, talent he choose are cultivation speed,alchemy)

When reading what happened in the previous life, I just want to say… MC doesn’t deserve this good girl. Well, love doesn’t really distinguish between whether you deserve them or not. Since she loves him and he finally grew a brain, just make it up to her in this life.

With that aside. Real review: characters are pretty flat and it feels like they never learn. It took multiple refutations and stuff for MC’s friend to understand MC truly don’t like the school beauty anymore. The villains are also annoying. Like god damn, leave them alone already. Why are you constantly trying to trip MC and FML over. Get a life?

MC is also a big coward. All the broken ass buffs from the system let him win numerous awards. Buddy confessed to FML on chapter 213 out of 236. If it weren’t because FML’s loyalty is maxed out, I doubt anyone else in her situation would continue liking MC after so many years. I got tired of watching filler chapters and skipped directly to the end.